Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2024 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Liberation (Ren)

Ehem... sorry for that outburst im just so excited for the second part.

man cant wait for ryemi to meet her dad, and even more so for ryan to meet mimi again. 

Our two main characters have quite a different dynamic than ryan and mimi, as mimi is a human turned goddess, lucy is a goddess turned human, honestly great work on mimi for teaching her manners shes a great mother ( you cant fool me thats their daughter ).

Ren also gives a different role than ryan. firstly, ryan is someone ryemi just met while ryan and mimi were already best of friends on the start of the story.

and more importantly now is the change of instead of there being two major groups ( ryan's and mimi's ), we have one group thats ren and ryumi, our two new characters, and ryan who gets a lot more of the limelight as he explores the world now ruled by goddesses 16 years after.

on another note i really like how Ithyrminah becomes more of a neutral force in the story instead instead of before, shows that maybe... just maybe theres a chance that humans and goddesses could coexist after all.

Thats all for now! I think the time ill be writing my fan work for your amazing piece will be after the second part ends so i have a full understanding of your work! Its great to have you back! ( even though im more than half a month late from saying this lol )

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

I'm glad that you are still interested in writing fan work and I would really love to read it someday. Although I might still have plans to extend to a part 3, the ending of part 2 will definitely give sufficient information about the world to write a comprehensive fan story, so I'm excited and hopefully I'll be able to write faster lol.

From hearing your thoughts, I can see that you have already been able to identify some of the key ideas that will come into play later in the story. Although I won't be revealing what they are. I think the way the ideas get woven into the story and characters will still end up surprising you though, at least I hope so.

Reviewer: Lightning Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2024 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Liberation (Ren)

Fight was great, im surprised ryemi could grow considering how scared she was at moments in previous chapters. Nice to see her and ren get a well deserved win. Im really loving their relationship so far.

Im guessing she has multiple domains or a domain that lets her copy other domains. Im looking forward to see how ren reacts to ryemi now.

Ive realized that zu's entry being deleted in the previous chapter was probably because she was killed here. Though speaking of the previous chapter, I thought that the people were killing and trying to eat each other was zu controlling them with her power. But then its revealed her power is just lightning and that it was her rules that caused them to be in that desperate state. That was a nice twist.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

There's still a lot of mystery surrounding Ryemi and her powers so hopefully we get a bit more clarity about that in the upcoming chapters. As you can probably guess, Ren and Ryemi will feature a slightly different relationship from other giantess-human pairs shown in part 1. There will be a more wholesome dynamic between these two so I hope you enjoy that kind of thing too. Good eye for identifying the Zu's entry thing.