Thank you. I've added a lot more now, though we still haven't gotten to the growth yet. I'm on track to write 20,000 words in the first week of this story, maybe more. It's going to be a truly "epic" tale. If you have any more specific criticisms, feel free to add them as we go. 

P.S. I deleted some of your old reviews because they were duplicated. Don't be discouraged from writing feedback, just wanted to do a bit of house-cleaning.