Thank you so much for the response.

These two will play a very major role in this story and I'll really be trying to dive deep into their character development, far deeper than I did for anyone in part 1. I'm putting a lot more emphasis on character development in part 2, so if you are into that I hope you will enjoy the direction the story is taking. At the end of part 2, I'd like to do a poll to see who are everyone's favourite characters.