




Date: June 04 2025 7:59 AM Title: PART 1
I created an account specifically to review this story, and im truly impressed by its depth and richness. The narrative is intricately crafted with engaging plots and unexpected twists, showcasing the thoughtful care put into this masterpiece. Every element feels meticulously designed and seamlessly woven together. The characters also undergo remarkable development, making the story incredibly immersive and captivating.
Thank you for writing such a Masterpiece!
Author's Response:
Hey! So happy to see you here. I’ve appreciated your support
on DeviantArt. I’ve noticed you favoriting lots of chapters over there and I
always recognize you :)
Thank you for such kind words about the story. At over 350K words I have put a ton of work
into it so hearing it be praised like that is very validating. Character
transformation is a big thing for me, there’s no point in telling a story this
long without it, the thing about it though, is that it’s very hard to plan.
Characters (humans!) are so contradictory and conflicting that even if you
think you plan a transformation, once you get there it might seem off. Growth
and transformation need to be felt out. So, I’ve walked through this story
blind to what is coming, hoping the characters grow properly. Have I succeeded
in doing that? I suppose that’s up to the reader to decide, it’s definitely not
perfect lol and I’m always looking back at missed opportunities. But I do enjoy
spending time with them, and I think that’s a good sign.
Wow, I rambled there for a bit. Let me just thank you again
so much for this review, it is some HIGH praise. I have already read it
multiple time (and will read it multiple more!)
I hope you post again with future releases… these reviews
mean the world to me :)





Date: March 25 2025 10:29 PM Title: PART 1
After reading the story for a second time, I can confidently say it’s by far one of the best giantess stories I’ve ever read. Everything about it is fantastic.
First, let’s talk about the action. All I can say is that we are truly blessed with this story: feet, ass, pussy, vore, crush all of it with just enough detail to let us visualize the scenes. You can feel what the characters are experiencing, whether it’s the tiny or the giantess. There are even some really fun and creative ideas, like the nylon games in Chapter 18. When you read it, you’re left with one wish: to take Trevor’s place and smell Donnica’s nylons yourself.
But what makes this story truly exceptional is the incredible work put into the characters something too many stories lack. In this story, every character gets some development. You can see them evolve throughout the narrative, witnessing their strengths and weaknesses. Even the giantesses have vulnerabilities, which is a refreshing change from the typical mean or gentle giantess archetypes. The attention to the characters’ emotions is impressive too; you can really feel what’s going through their minds. Their backstories help the reader connect with them because, despite being tiny or giant, they retain a human element a struggle we all face in life. As you read, you’ll experience a wide range of emotions: fear, anger, love, sadness.
The critique of our society is another fascinating aspect. Even in this world of giants and tinies, money remains a dominant force. The story highlights the darker sides of humanity, with inequality standing out like in the island arc, where tinies are reduced to mere toys for wealthy giantesses.
In conclusion, this story is absolutely fantastic, and I recommend reading it even a second time to catch all the small details that make it even better.
Author's Response:
What can I say about this amazing review :)
Never in a million years did I ever think someone would read
my story multiple times. It is truly one of the most flattering things I have
read on here.
Thank you so much for singling out the characters, I think
about them so much and try to always put them in situations where they are
conflicting with one another and growing. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed my time with them,
and I am so happy others have to!
You know I never started out writing this as a critique of
society, but I guess those elements have appeared as I built the story world.
It’s hard to have a story go so long and be populated by such dominating
cruelty and it not take on meaning in some way, I suppose ;)
Thank you for this review, and all your support during the
time I was away. You are a true friend and super fan :D
Date: March 06 2025 11:42 PM Title: PART 1
So many here have expressed many of the ideas and feelings I have and I don't want to be redundant. But I do want to express my concern that Rebecca is losing her free will. I like the relationship that she and Amber have forged, but I hate to see her become a true slave.
Date: March 04 2025 4:30 AM Title: PART 1
There's a lot to try to digest here, so I'll kind of go through it piece by piece.
S1 - I could feel the dissonance that was created when that knock on the door happened. It was like a song rising towards a beat drop and then... the drop not happening. Was it wildly irresponsible of Donnica to leave Trevor there? Yes, especially knowing how the other people in the firm (read, Helena) feel about tinies in general. Is it Annabel's fault for not staying behind to watch after him? Not at all; she's doing her job as an assistant and assumed what anyone sane there would assume - that Donnica might need her in the conference room so she should accompany her. The cruelty and apathy that you mention is very obvious, which I am sure Donnica and everyone else exhibited towards the slave, but that Trevor is not used to, and in that sense makes it even more jarring. I knew (strongly hoped) that Trevor would make it out alive, but the irony of Helena wishing that it was Trevor down there as she absolutely smothers him is beautiful.
S2 - Donnica's mood swings are certainly something, and it seems like they really come from this everlasting battle between her heart and her ego. She feels (rightfully) terrible that Trevor was put in such a spot, and understands that he does deserve some time to himself to think about it. But the sadness turning into anger is that pivotal point where her rational emotions go on the back burner compared to her ego: how dare Trevor be anything but thankful for everything she has done and how dare he be mad at her for one slip up which isn't even her fault (her words, not mine :/)? The decision to cancel his registration was not what I expected. I knew (strongly hoped) that she would come to her senses before doing something so stupid yet she utilized Trevor's streamlined systems and made him easy pickings. Oh well. 1 for 2 on the strongly hoped isn't too bad. If this chapter ever gets shown in a writer's ed class, Annabel mentioning her Tiny Breaking Class (TM pending) is a great example of Chekhov's gun.
S3/S4 - Trevor's exhibiting Stockholm Syndrome? Or is he just so deeply and manically in love with Donnica that he partially wishes she really would utterly dominate him? Regardless, his wanting to go back and make things right really shows what a stand-up guy he is. (What is it with guys having to be the ones to apologize after their girlfriend hurts their feelings? Okay, I'll stop before any misogyny comments start.) I really thought that Annabel was going to grab him, 'fix' him, then present him to Donnica, but I think that would be a bit too far especially since Donnica seemed so shocked and disgusted by what Annabel brought up earlier. Regardless, I'm very glad that Annabel did the right thing, and Trevor seems to love being back in Donnica's company, although I'm not entirely sure if that's fully genuine or partially driven by relief that he is still alive and that this psychotic goddess of a woman is the only one that can get him his registration back.
S5 - Nice to see Trevor and Amber getting along. Trevor seems rightfully concerned about Rebecca, the audience seems rightfully concerned about Rebecca, but her and Amber seem to think all is well. Is this an abusive relationship, or have these two actually just found their person regardless of how dark, demented, or pathetic it may look from outside? TBD.
S6 - Ohhhhh no. Oh no. Ohhhhhhhhhh no. Trevor is not going to break. He's going to fight Annabel every step of the way, and if he finds out that Donnica is the one that ordered her breaking of him, I don't know if he can ever forgive her. This does not seem to be heading towards a happy ending for Trevor, but it's difficult to tell because being broken by Annabel and becoming fully Donnica's might be the happiest ending of all ( ;) ). Poor Trevor. I hope he maintains his sense of self by the end.
Date: February 27 2025 8:37 PM Title: PART 1
So apparently the site domains may expire in a few days. I would recommend joining the discord for this site. A there is a lot of writers on their for up to shoot ideas at. Also to keep uptodate on any site information
Author's Response:
Hey yes I heard about this, hopefully it doesn't come to that. I am already on the GW discord, if you check the end of chapter notes for the last few chapters I have my Discord handle listed, I also have a thread created in the story-talks channel where I discuss the story with other people, pop by if you're around. Should something happen to the site I will drop links to other places I am posting the story in that thread (like Deviant Art) so don't worry, the story will continue to update :)
(also, I'm dropping a new chapter shortly!!!!)
...and all the same, thanks for the heads up!





Date: February 24 2025 3:25 AM Title: PART 1
Are you entirely sure you were wrong in assuming Donnica was happy about Trevor’s progress as office manager?
Well I was until you asked this question!
But I get what you're saying here. I took that passage a little too seriously and assumed that's all there was to Donnica's thinking on this. So that confidence in him that she showed when she talked him into the job was also legit. And you're right that people are contradictory, and now I feel like I have a better understanding of where Donnica is coming from here.
I'm no longer a little disappointed in her.
Author's Response:
“I'm no longer a little disappointed in her.”
Phew…. This is all that matters, gotta look out for my girl
;)
Date: February 18 2025 7:55 PM Title: PART 1
This review is not about annebel, sorry for the tease, but this is my thoughts on Trevor and Rebecca,
I have finally narrowed down why I didnt like Trevor at the start, and why I usually dont care for men in these types of stories.
To often men in thses stories are both following there cocks and being passive. Trevor read to me that way. He was so far up Donnica's ass. LIke I couldnt understand why he wasnt trying to actually do what Rebecca asked of him, back when the info that was on her laptop and the excuses he gave about not being able to get to the incriminating data didnt ring true to me. LIke dude, this could help your peoples lot in life. I was so frustrated with him. I was writing him off, because as far as I was concerned, he was what Rebecca is now.
Rebecca on the other hand, was so full of spit, spite, vigor. She was standing up to her giantess where Trevor cowed before his. Then things started to change. Rebecca both fell for her giantess, and imprinted on her. She can still fight her (maybe) but wants to make her happy. Even at her own expense.
Trevor wants to be with Donnica but not at the cost of his own freedom. He has become a much more interesting character to me. He has really changed, he is starting to fight back. Though only thing left that really frustrates me is the fact that Trevor loves a woman he knows wants to set back tiny rights. Like she wants to make tinys property. How he loves her is beyond me. But the fact that she loves him is what gives him a chance. I am hoping that he will yet actually help his people. But I realize that may be too much for a giant that is trapped in a tinyies body.
Look I get wanting to be dominated by a beautiful partner, but there must be balance. I really am interested to see how this relationship plays out. I am actually rooting for them to find a healthy balance, presumably after alot of tears and words and maybe some violence.
So yea Trevor has jumped up alot in my estimation. But I am still heavily invested in Amber and Rebecca.
Now for my own hypocrisy I guess. I know I just got done harping on Trevor needing to help improve his peoples lot. But this genre is size. Cant have size play without a big and a tiny. The big rules, the tiny obeys. So Amber and Rebecca's relationship is almost ideal for me. Amber needs to just back off just a little. Make sure her tiny is genuienly happy. Not jjust lost in lust or sexual graification of the
I love the imprinting and hate the imprinting. It helps faciliate a tiny's relationship with a big they may not have otherwise had. But it muddies the waters of freewill. Is this really rebbecca or just her body. Is she really wanting to play and love Amber like this, or is it just a physical reaction to keep her safe. Thats my big concern, and I am really worried about Rebecca.
So Trevor and Rebecca have almost mirrored each others development. TRevor was passive and subserveant to Donnica earlier where Rebecca fought back. Now Trevor is far more assertive and confident where Rebecca is dominated and maybe losing herself. Though hopefully she can now commiserate with Trevor about how great ass is.
Author's Response:
Dude, I never noticed it before, but you’re completely
right, Rebecca and Trevor really have switched in terms of active/passive
protagonists. Though I will say, while Rebecca’s shift is by design,
Trevor’s wasn’t.
I started this story back in November, just lying in bed
“fantasizing” about a scenario where I went to a giantess’s house for dinner
and ended up getting tormented by her teenage daughter. The next day, I started
typing it up. Fun fact; I started writing it in Notepad (which I always
keep open for jotting stuff down), and I haven’t stopped typing in it since.
All 250K+ words of this story have been written in Notepad lol. That
said, I’ve started doing my final drafts in Microsoft Word… mostly thanks to It
Was Me trying to break my Notepad addiction. One day I’ll get
there :P
I totally agree that Trevor was a somewhat weak lead in the
first 10 chapters (although he did have his moments!) A passive protagonist is almost
never a good thing, but honestly? I was winging it back then. And it’s
worth noting that this is literally my first giantess story ever,
something I just started on a whim. At the beginning, I was mostly using it as
a way to write a ton of smut, which you can definitely tell from the
earlier chapters. Character development wasn’t really my focus; I was just
testing the waters of the giantess erotica space.
But then around Chapter 11, when the characters
really started taking shape, that’s when things took off. And now, I
think the characters are the strongest part of the story.
I know I said passive protagonists make for weak leads, and
I know Rebecca might seem passive right now. But that’s intentional, and
that’s all I’ll say for now… I’m taking her on an odyssey, and I can’t
wait to show everyone where it leads.
And yes, you totally teased me with that Annabel review…
when I saw your name and the wall of text I for sure thought it was about our
star Breaker! Although this review was great and super fun to break down :)
Thank you!
(although I’m still expecting that Annabel review…)
Date: February 06 2025 4:43 PM Title: PART 1
So it’s not really Annabel as it’s more here secondary job, the tiny breaker. And we’ll omit was stated that unregistered Tiny’s are taken. So since Rebecca is unregistered now. I was curious about how much danger she would be in from being taken.
Author's Response:
Ok yes, I see what you mean now :)
And that’s a very interesting observation you made my
friend, I wonder if Rebecca and Annabel will ever run into each other…
Date: February 06 2025 4:13 AM Title: PART 1
So I do have a question now that Annabel is in the picture. If this is pure spoiler territory then don’t answer, but how would Rebecca be viewed now that she is in ambers care. Is she protected, or does the fact that she lives with a big not matter. And how would she get the process going to be protected by the law and being ambers girlfriend/servant. Legally speaking. Like how much danger is she in each time these two girls go out.
Author's Response:
Ok, so I am going to (partially) address this in a coming
chapter - what it means for the girls to be out in public - and, not to get too much into spoilers, Rebecca’s registration will
factor into a future story arc.
Can I ask what Annabel had to do with this question? It kind
of threw me off the first couple of times I read it lol
Date: January 28 2025 6:03 PM Title: PART 1
Just read the latest chapter and it is perfect. I really like how these characters have grown. When I go back to read these chapters, I always find myself reading amber part more than the mother.
Author's Response:
One thing
every writer loves to hear is that their characters have grown so thank you so
much for saying so :D
Amber &
Rebecca certainly seem like the fan favorite now, although when I started the
story Donnica & Trevor were all the rage . Maybe they can steal their thunder back
this arc…
Appreciate the
comment!
Date: January 27 2025 11:04 PM Title: PART 1
Ok, wow, Amber has really mellowed. Cause earlier in the story she would have killed that guy. I honestly wasnt expecting her be so gentle. She has really grown in this story. I am quite impressed with her. I can honestly say I didnt see this coming with Amber when I first started reading. Hell shes almost night and day from what she was. Rebecca has been very good for her.
Now Trevor. Yes once again, I like his development. I also am glad he realized that none of those people will ever see him as more than a bug. I get that Donnica simply over powers him, and he wants to be over powered. But he is actually quite intelligent. I loved his break down of whats wrong with the law firm.
So one thing I havent decided yet is how tiny's should be handled. On one hand, that island they went to was absolutely horrifying and no one, tiny or big should every be treated like that. How ever the tinies you keep showing outside of Rebecca and Trevor, well arent exactly portraid as upstanding and good people. Maybe they are just to beat down and can really only think of themselves but damn.
I am so conflicted on the pleasing development of Amber and Rebeccas relationship. On the one hand I love that they are in a seamingly healthy relationship, minus the age and power issues. On the other hand I loved reading all the delightful humialiating things Amber was doing to Rebecca to. So yea, also Rebecca while it was degrading to be made to fuck Trevor, hint Trevor really enjoyed eating your ass, so yea I dont really call that being mean to Trevor. Though that might change if Donnica ever finds out about it.
Author's Response:
Is it really surprising that Amber wouldn’t crush him?
Despite all her wickedness earlier in the story, she’s never actually crushed
anyone. I do agree Rebecca’s been great for her development, though it helps
that Amber’s completely head over heels in love right now. Love tends to mellow
people out… at least for a while.
In the chapters ahead, we’ll start to see just how much this
size-difference relationship impacts both of them, and I’m really excited to
dive into that!
“Now Trevor. Yes once again, I like his development. I
also am glad he realized that none of those people will ever see him as more
than a bug. I get that Donnica simply over powers him, and he wants to be
over powered. But he is actually quite intelligent. I loved his break down of
whats wrong with the law firm. “
Glad to hear you liked the breakdown…. There was nothing
super relationship’y or SMUT’y going on in the scene (minus the ass bit at the
end) and there also isn’t much layered going on either; no deeper character
reveal or double meaning, it’s a (fairly) straight forward plot scene so I was
a little bit apprehensive when writing and putting it in. But yeah, I like the
way it turned out, and it’s nice to see Trevor flex his mental muscles. We’ll
be seeing more of that moving forward as he navigates his way through Donnica’s
office.
“I am so conflicted on the pleasing development of Amber
and Rebeccas relationship. On the one hand I love that they are in a seamingly
healthy relationship, minus the age and power issues. On the other hand I loved
reading all the delightful humialiating things Amber was doing to Rebecca to.
So yea, also Rebecca while it was degrading to be made to fuck Trevor, hint
Trevor really enjoyed eating your ass, so yea I dont really call that being
mean to Trevor. Though that might change if Donnica ever finds out about it. “
Bro, I 100% get what you’re saying. There has certainly been
a loss of some of the cruelty and humiliation that the first part of Amber and
Rebecca’s relationship brought. But there’s a character, starting next chapter,
that is going to reintroduce some of that back into the story so look out for
that ;)
Thanks as always for the comment man!





Date: January 27 2025 2:16 AM Title: PART 1
Just saw your response now sorry I didn't reply earlier. For the titles, it would be finding out what works for you really. I wouldn't go ridiculously long, but maybe not 2 words or something either. A nice medium length, or like 5-10 words title that just gives an idea what the chapter is about. That way if someone is going back through it they can more easily find a certain part of the story they wanted to see again.
Am definitely still looking forward to more of this story in general, and curious as to what the next vore piece will entail since you said you had ideas to do a bit more of that at some point. I have some hopes for what I'd see with that, but just looking forward to seeing whatever you do
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback, I'll try to get to work on some titles :)
Glad you are looking forward to the story... update tonight!
Date: January 22 2025 3:49 PM Title: PART 1
this story keeps gettin better. thank you for your work.
Author's Response:
I'm happy to hear you say that. The story is obviously getting quite long, and as a writer, you're never really sure if people are still enjoying it. So knowing someone thinks it's getting better is really encouraging :)
Thanks for the comment, I appreciate the love!
Date: January 22 2025 12:17 AM Title: PART 1
For clarification the story is to break in a pet. It is fairly long at 440000 words. It leans very heavily on the cruel side. But I find it a very good read. So enjoy
Author's Response:
yeah I found it on the site last night, I read the summary and scanned some of the reviews and honestly man it looks amazing, so thank you so much for the recommendation. At the moment I am currently only focusing on writing - I've written and edited 200k words in basically 2 months - but when I'm done with this story (or I get to a place where I feel a break is warranted) I intend to finally check out some of the other stories on this site and I added this one to the list. And again, that name is sexy as fuckkkkkkkkk, plus I do love me some cruel giantess!
It's awesome that a place like giantessworld exist where we can meet other people with our fetish and share stories and the like, I really do appreciate you taking the time to recommend a story you think I might like. And thanks again for the comments on my own story, I cant wait to show you were I'm taking it (and you'll like Trevor even more... I swear!)
Date: January 20 2025 11:36 PM Title: PART 1
Also I love that Rebecca has finally given into foot love. Mind you outside of size play I am not a foot guy, and I have only in the last few years come to enjoy foot love within this fetish. So I can understand Rebecca's own struggle with that particular kink.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Rebecca’s
foot worship is really fun to write because it comes from a different place
than my own (I have a foot fetish)
Exploring the tension between Rebecca’s deep revulsion for
feet and the uncontrollable chemical reactions in her body that draw her to
Amber, especially to her intensely smelly feet, adds an extra layer of
conflicted desire that I find fascinating.
Date: January 17 2025 1:46 AM Title: PART 1
By the way I have a question? It’s not very clear, is Donnie’s aware of Rebecca or has amber and Trevor managed to keep her completely unaware
Author's Response:
Donnica is not aware of Rebecca. She is Ambers little secret.
Date: January 15 2025 2:13 AM Title: PART 1
I have really grown to like the story. The latest chapter was the best one yet and the reason why I enjoy these story. Can’t wait to see how this story progress.
Author's Response:
Yeah man the
story has really come a long way since the beginning. Back then I was still figuring
out how to write a giantess story (this is my first) and I was still fleshing
out the characters but I really feel I’m in a groove now and taking the story
to the next level. I’m really excited to share what’s coming.
Thanks for
the review man, I appreciate it and hope to see you chime in more often :)





Date: January 14 2025 9:39 PM Title: PART 1
Had to catch up on this, had fallen around 6 chapters back so spent the last day getting caught up. Really enjoying it. The development with Amber and Rebecca is interesting and I'm curious to see where it goes
And I loved you finally included some vore. I love vore and even though this is a feet and ass focused story, I was glad to see it. I'd love to see more in the future, whether it's Donnica or Amber, or even one of Amber's friends, eating a random tiny so that Trevor or Rebecca sees it as a way to have them demonstrate their power and dominance to them even more and threaten them.
Awesome stuff
Author's Response:
Bro, so you read what? Up from chapters 11 or 12? Some intense developments in those chapters. I hope you had a good day reading!
I’m not traditionally a vore guy but I got to admit I did enjoy writing that passage and I certainly do have a few more scenes planned for you guys ;)
Thanks for
the comments, always love to hear what people think of my story.
Date: January 14 2025 2:33 AM Title: PART 1
I do have a request but if you don’t want to that’s fine. For many chapters now Rebecca having association with ambers ass has been punishment,
Well could you write a scene where Rebecca is willing to submit to ambers ass and all that entails. also you teased about Rebecca having a golden shower, would you be willing to write that. If not I understand fully.
However I guess such things must wait till we see just how solid this new relationship truly is.
So I can not express how much I loved that domination and submission scene. That was art as far I am concerned. And in my mind speaks to the core foundation of size play. The sheer domination and power of being big, and sheer powerlessness and submission of being a tiny before a giant. It’s why in my mind a big needs a tiny and vice versa.
Author's Response:
Hey man,
Sorry but I don’t take any direct request for the story, I’m letting my own intuition guide it. However, if you’ve read up to this point you know how much I like ass play so just keep your eyes open ;)
Date: January 14 2025 2:16 AM Title: PART 1
Ok, maybe I have one thing to say. Poor Trevor being flicked away like nothing! LOL
I hope Trevor and Donnica get to the profound state that Rebecca and Amber just found.
I'm still rooting for Donnivor, wait that sounded too vore-y.
Donnicor? LOL, too many ways for it to sound all wrong.
Author's Response:
LOL poor Trevor indeed, I actually laughed at that myself after I wrote it, Amber can be a little rough with him sometime. But you know it’s strange, I actually kind of feel Trevor is a bit of a parental figure to Amber. I know that’s odd to say due to their aggressive sexual history, but still, I always get a vibe that he has this sort of patience with her, and he also gets firm with her when he needs to.
Donnivor… is this some kind of trick to get me to write more vore????
GET BACK I SAY!!!!