




Date: November 13 2024 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Haven (Ryan)
Guess that answers my question about Ryan. This was an awesome return. It seems I was right about him being on earth all this time but I didn't predict him getting a phd in theoretical physics lol.
Guy is one of the best martial artists on earth and now a genius as well, would be crazy if his opponents weren't colossal goddesses with powers as well. Feels like how batman is ridiculously peak human but still the underdog when compared to the rest of the members with actual powers.
Ren was also some kind of scientist so I guess Ryan and Ren might get along well if they meet. Anyway this was a great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Ryan will continue to be integral in this story as well so I hope you can look forward to that. There will be other returning characters from part 1 that play major roles here as well.





Date: November 13 2024 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Haven (Ryan)
Damn the sweet return of ryan was perfect and damn this story keeps getting better and better every chapter. Also don’t mind if it’s less smut and more character focused this time maybe part three will be heavily smut lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestion, I will try to figure out what is best. I will try to write the story as spicy as I can even if there won't be as many explicitly smutty scenes in this part. (although I can definitely promise there will still be some for sure)