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Reviewer: Lightning Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2025 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryemi)

Incredible chapter, loved this ending. This chapter really proves Ryemi is Mimis daughter lol. They had pretty much the same idea of humanity living on their breast, though just nipple in Mimis case. Not to mention it turns out Ryemi is a yandere as well lmao. Though I doubt Ryemi would actually hurt anyone but shrinking Ren for blushing when a girl is flirting with him, when Ren and Ryemi aren't even dating definitely seems like yandere behavior to me.

Also both endings have Ryemi or Mimi reflect on the loneliness they feel despite all the lives on their body, though Ryemis case is much better than mimis. The most hilarious part has to be that the dark Mimi ending might actually be the best ending for humanity as there are far less causalities. Since in that timeline Layla does not kill billions unlike in this one. Though living conditions for the survivors are far better in this timeline lol.

Another parallel I noticed with that ending is that both of them end up being by far the strongest and yet they long to go back to how things were before.

Its interesting to see how Ryemi responds to becoming a goddess, she had powers all along but she could only use in them in short bursts so she only ever used them in important situations so she was nothing but heroic with them, but now we get to see her be a bit more selfish, especially when even her stray thoughts can cause reality to warp.

Like those rebels that she shrank. Definitely an entertaining scene but I don't see how that punishment is really supposed to teach them anything.There are a few goddesses who deserve that treatment a lot more than they did lol. Considering they are just normal humans, you can just put them in a normal prison and actually try to sort out their grievances. Though if they just targeted only the goddesses that came to earth as part of the cycle and made sure there was no collateral damage then they wouldn't really be wrong.


I would to like to see how some of the goddesses like Alluria went from brutally killing countless humans to actually living with them. Especially Ethesia, considering her hatred of humanity caused pretty much the whole story. I feel she got off easy lol, but she is useful in getting through to the other goddesses. It would be cool to see her thoughts at some point and maybe expressing some remorse since even when she turned it was more of a lets give these humans one more chance rather than actually admitting wrongdoing.

At least Layla had the tragic back story, Ethesia just had one precious person die which had already been avenged and then some, but she just carried on killing anyway. I think a proper redemption for her might be to have Mimi take away her power willingly so she can actually live as a normal human like how Mina does

Also if last chapter wasn't already enough to confirm the Ryemi and Ren romance then this ending pretty much sealed it. Considering Ren does not mind Melody flirting with him, clearly the age gap is not a problem and Ryemi clearly likes Ren romantically, like shes actually yandere for him lol. I would really like to see more of Ren and Ryemis relationship, with how Ryemis new power and distance affects their dynamic.

If Ryemi keeps this behavior up, I could see Ren actually being a little afraid of Ryemi, since he has no idea that Ryemi is just jealous and not actually angry at him. Like at the birthday party we already had Ren trembling a bit in front of Ryemi. Though im sure Ryemi would be heartbroken when she realizes the misunderstanding she created.

Also I feel like Alluria being a teacher would let her meet Ren if they taught at the same school or something. Alluria would remember him and Ryemi, since she was the one who mind controlled him to beat the hell out of Ryemi and yet Ryemi didnt fight back despite having the power to do so. Even back then, when she only knew him for a day, she would have rather died than hurt Ren, let alone now. If events do happen where Ren is genuinely afraid of Ryemi or at least does not feel valued by her anymore than maybe Alluria could tell him about this incident, since Ren still does not know. I hope Ren and Ryemi get together. 

Also for fixing the planet, couldn't ryemi temporarily give Fae more power and then get Fae to fix a planet. Since in the 2nd ending when Fae absorbed the shards, she was able to restore a completely destroyed earth. It seems Ryemi has a limit that some other goddesses dont have, as clearly Fae does not need to visualize or at least know everything to bring a planet or person back perfectly.

Its kind of funny that having her go to school would probably make her a lot stronger if you just got her in a science class, maybe Ren and Ryan can give her a crash course lol.

Also can Ryemi revive Chromphemus, since unlike the rest of the dead people, she actually knows and has met Chromphemus so she shouldn't have trouble visualizing her. Would Ryemi just imagining Chromphemus being next to her or something be enough to do it?

Love seeing Ryan and Mimi together. I would like to see more about that one year they lived together and how they reconnected. Also did Mimi get over her trauma and shrink down or did Ryemi shrink Mimi down with her power?

Though speaking of Mimis trauma, there is still that innocent city Mimi destroyed at the end of part 1. Can she really move on without telling Ryan? I wonder how Ryan and possibly Ryemi would react. Ryan having his secret be his gts fetish was hilarious but Mimi has an actual dark secret. I can just imagine Ryan expecting something like that and then he gets hits with this lol.

I can just imagine Genesis spirit watching Mimi destroy that city and facepalm as she now chooses Ryemi to be the hero that saves everyone instead lmao. I mean Ryemi did do pretty much everything Mimi said she hoped to do in part 1, with saving the world and keeping the peace.

Also Lyre is winning as usual, after the prison, he just spent 16 years being with a fire goddess every day and now lives in a huge mansion with her, what a legend.

I see that Ryan and Mimi are not married yet, im predicting that their wedding will be in one of the side stories and Ryemi will really want to go. Maybe at that point they find a way around the planet problem so she can attend and she can finally give Ren a hug again lol.

Speaking of Ryemi and her parents, its kind of sad that just when Ryemi grew big enough to finally see Mimi face to face, Ryemi is now so big that the situation is reversed but an even worse scale. Though I can see Ryemi and Mimi bonding over romance., I can imagine Mimi telling Ryemi when Ryan said he fancied Lucy, that she claimed him right there and that's how Ryemi was born. That might encourage Ryemi to go on the attack with Ren but hopefully not scare the living daylights out of him lol.

Nice to see Ryan being basically leader of the earth and together with Mimi. He has definitely earned it. Now it is Ren who needs his happy ending instead of having a jealous near omnipotent goddess mess with him without Ren even knowing what he did wrong lmao.

Loved this ending, this is my 2nd favorite just behind the dark Mimi ending. Though it is this ending that makes the story feel complete and actually gives a satisfying end to all the characters, with the dark Mimi ending being just pure fun and letting us see Mimi at her full potential. This has been an absolutely fantastic story and I cant wait for more. 

Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2024 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryemi)

WHDISBDISBDODBXODBOSNDPSJXODNXID HOW HAS THIS BEEN HIDING BEHIND ME ALL THIS TIME RAHHHHHH



Author's Response:

Hello and welcome back, hope you enjoy part 2 as well!

Reviewer: Patet Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2024 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryemi)

The construction of the characters and their feelings, as shallow and sometimes forced, manage to capture my attention a lot and that's why this is one of the stories I like the most. Most of the stories are fetishistic and sometimes ridiculous, but this one has really proven itself worthy of being called history. Seeing the development of the story, if I were in her position I would highlight the romantic relationships of some giant characters with humans, such as giving Alluria a situation where she finds a boy who is different from the others and makes her rethink all her actions so far, or her continuing as she is but with a boy who is her favorite. I think I'm trying to intrude too much into the story, but I have to say that even if it was going to reflect my ideas or not, your story will definitely be in my favorites.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback.

I tried my best not to make characters that are too straightforward and simple(although the cast is relatively big so it can't be helped if some of them are less fleshed out), so I guess it can sometimes become rather lengthy and forced when I depict their feelings. I am still relatively new to writing so there are times when I struggle to put my ideas into fruition in a natural way. I've already written quite a bit ahead, and I hope to say that future chapters probably improve on this aspect and actually feature some genuinely good(although rather melodramatic) character development. Hopefully.

With regards to romantic relationships, that was more heavily the focus in part 1 of the story, this part probably won't be highlighting that much of it but such ideas will still make it to the story here and there in the future. I hope you keep following the story anyway and I'd like to keep seeing your thoughts.

Reviewer: Lightning Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2024 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryemi)

I just left my review for part 1 and then came here. Great story as always. 

I have so many questions, I definitely was not expecting a 16 year time skip and new main characters. 

It looks like ryemi is the same age as mimi and Ryan were in part 1. Though I hope the person ryemi is looking for isn't Ryan due to Ryan being on earth all this time.

I felt bad enough for Ryan when he had missed mimi and her eventual baby for 1  year, let alone 16 years. He just missed her entire childhood. And its pretty rough for mimi as well, in nearly every chapter of hers there was always a mention of her love for Ryan so she must have been hit hard. Well assuming this is what happened but I guess the person could be someone else and Ryan was there with mimi to raise their daughter. 

Also its funny how in this one chapter ryemi used her flames more than ignis did in all of part 1 pretty much, though I'm guessing aunt iggy was the one who trained her to use her flames. 

I like the dynamic between ryemi and ren so far, im eager to see where it goes. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews.

I did the 16 year time skip to accelerate the story. There are many ideas I have for the characters introduced in this part and I wanted to skip the parts that the reader would probably be less interested to see in depth(e.g. Mimi's training and raising her daughter). I also didn't want the story to drag on too long and become too intimidating for new readers to get into. Given what I have planned for the series, I will most likely need a part 3 as well to fit all the content in.

Regardless, I will try to keep the chapters exciting and filled with enough giantess content to make it easy to get through.

Reviewer: UrsoPequeno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2024 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryemi)

Happy to see you back. I'm looking forward to the new chapters



Author's Response:

Happy to see you here! Hope you enjoy this part as well, although it may be a bit more story focused than the previous one with more main characters.

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2024 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryemi)

Omg !!! My glorious king has returned!!!!!!! 


Wow 16 years and I’m guessing this mysterious girl is the daughter of two known characters that I won’t spoil for people who don’t know. 

I honestly can’t wait to see where this goes now 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

More chapters will be coming soon, but do expect my upload schedule to be slightly slower than part 1 since I have been getting busier lately.

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