[Report This]Date: November 08 2024 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 12: Conspiracy
You've actually made me like Thomas!
I never would have thought he was the type to legit fall in love at all, let alone in a reality TV environment. But seeing him having to be restrained to keep from going after an almost 30-foot Kim was really touching. He really loves Monica, and the only time he's not acting like a selfish prick is when he's worried about her. Very admirable, something I didn't think I'd ever say about him.
And Monica realizing that she really did love him when they were reunited, despite her confusion between her feelings for him and her love and fear of Kim, was such a sweet moment. Monica fighting between her fear of being forced to fuck Kim, her lust at liking bring forced into it, and her loyalty to Thomas really makes me feel for her. She's the most sympathetic figure in the story, I'd say, so seeing her go through the anguish of her own body betraying her and clouding her emotions is exceptionally gripping.
Darren immediately going "Fuck yeah!" and grabbing a knife when Sam suggested killing Kim had me fucking rolling! Darren isn't the smartest dude in the world, to say the least. I was surprised that Thomas was cautious enough to realize that immediately going with the plan when a stranger suggested it wasn't the best idea. This is another reason he's grown on me.
Oddly enough, it makes sense that some of the crew have started to worship Kim. The bigger she gets, the less like them she acts, and the confidence she displays is going to affect hiw others see her, especially those that aren't the focus of her games or anger. So some members of the med team, who have to measure her science-defying body on a daily basis and only see how she treats others, starting to deify her seems almost natural to expect over time.
Again, Thomas was so clever to use his own fear of Kim to infiltrate the villa. He knew she wanted to dominate rather than actually kiss any of them, so resisting her was such a smart idea. Of course, once Kim pinned him down, that was clearly instinct rather than acting afraid on his part, but his plan still worked nonetheless.
Kim making the lovely couple do everything but actually fuck may well be one of the hottest scenes I've read of yours. From start to finish, I couldn't stop reading. It was fucking incredible. Kim was so dominant that she didn't even need to touch them most of the time
But when she did, oh shit! Just so well done! I can't even pull out a favorite part of the scene because I loved the whole thing so much! What a fun, sexy, and dangerous concept!
And, of course, Kim makes them milk her at the end. I'm not normally into that sort of thing (I've got nothing against it, either; it’s just not my thing), but the way Kim forces them to do it, implying the order rather than outright saying it, was sexy as hell!
Of course, I can't get through a review without pitching about Charlie. Him "making" Kim redo her entrance into the courtyard while holding that guy even more recklessly than before once again shows how fake reality TV really is. Oh, and it was terrible for the guy, too. Yeah, that's just as important.
The dynamic between Charlie and Kim us an interesting one. Kim likes Charlue featuring her in the show, so she allows him to pretend like he's running things. I can't tell if that smile she shot him when he ordered that second take was sincere because she liked his suggestion or manipulative.
And between his obsession to call the shots and his fear/fanatical devotion to Kim, he really thinks he does but treats his "star" like the goddess she's becoming. I'm glad to see this is at least wearing the bastard down, though. I really hope a reckoning is coming for this man soon.
I'm intrigued to see how the assassination attempt goes. Kim's reaction should be ... interesting.