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Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2024 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Defeat (Mimi)

Oh damn lots of in depth analysis of Mimi and how she is conflicted about what she is doing and what she is now. Loved how she reconciled with her dad and Amara. And damn the goddesses have really barely used their powers because damn. 

Also the Iggy and Lyrie relationship caught me off guard a bit I saw it coming but damn they really like that lol

this light goddess is giving major frieze vibes on how she sees the humans as vermin. Plus damn very powerful.

then with Mimi and that city  oh boy is ryan going to not trust her if he ever finds out about what she did regardless of how she felt in that moment.

so now their in hiding and trying to grow stronger huh major dbz vibes their with the time chamber basically but cool

overall great chapter and character building honestly and I can’t wait to see more.

predictions

hmmmmm I’ll still keep my early predictions from last time there but for now new predictions

1) Ryan makes a need goddess ally but starts developing similar feelings towards like Mimi futher proving his size fetish 

2) Jacob goes rogue to research how to use similar power like origin to shrink the goddess and eliminate them one by one 

3) Ryan faces near death again liking being consumed by a goddess but unlocks his true potential escaping from the stomach and emerging like a wild beast like Erin from AOT lol I’m sorry he still gives me MC with super power vibes still 



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your thoughts!



I just uploaded the epilogue to Part 1, which means you will have to wait for Part 2 before seeing if any of your predictions come true. Hope you continue sticking with the story even then!

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