Date: February 07 2026 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your the title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn't help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I'm a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I'd love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord.
Discord: nebuladoodles
Email: luckiest297@gmail.com
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying my story. There are four more chapters to come, once I get around to editing them.
Date: February 02 2025 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm surprised there are not more comments. I am very much enjoying this story, so please keep at it.
Are you also listed as "Breastclimber" or is that another author?
Author's Response:
Thank you for writing a review.
I am very much enjoying writing this story, so I intend to keep at it. Right now I'm estimating that there will be 24 or 25 chapters in total.
Breastclimber is my husband.
Date: October 29 2024 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Like this, its setting up to be really interesting with a unique bit of world building. This is greatly enjoyable to read!
Author's Response:
It's been greatly enjoyable to write too. I'm working on chapter 9 now.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2024 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good. Will there be more chapters?
Author's Response:
Yes. I'm just about to post chapter 2 and I'm currently working on chapter 5.
[Report This]Date: October 08 2024 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good start. I'll admit that some of Kristi's behavior and actions felt forced to me, and I was willing to overlook that because her and Rory's interactions were very hot and well-written, but then the cliffhanger ending completely justifies her "porny" mannerisms. I did not expect where this chapter was going, and I'm curious to see where the story goes from here.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying my story. My motivation for writing this was to justify the beginning by the end of the chapter.
Date: October 08 2024 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this setup, excited to see where that cliffhanger leads to
Author's Response:
Thank you for your interest. Chapter 2 is available now.
[Report This]Date: October 08 2024 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start, looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your interest. Chapter 2 is available now.