Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2024 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Power (Mimi)

Uh oh, looks like Mimi let her size and power go to her head.  It's pretty clear her desire to protect humanity is actually just to protect Ryan first and humanity second.  Even then she was pretty authoritative when she thought he was still in the school.  If and when Ryan comes back and talks to the people in the school he's not going to be happy.  She may have snapped out of it for now but the damage is done.  It'll be interesting to what happens with her group and Ryan's group moving forward.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

The first part of the story will be reaching its end pretty soon, but part two will be coming soon after so not to worry. I hope you continue supporting the series, I love to read all of your thoughts.