[Report This]Date: September 28 2024 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Homecoming (Mimi)
Wow caught with the chapters and story and absolutely love everything so far !! Ryan is my favorite character so far like his will to survive and save humanity despite the odds is amazing
Lucy and Mimi are great two and the art has been fantastic to really helps with understanding the scale of these goddess
this chapter was great with Mimi showing her leader ship is amazing and her relationship with Percy and Father are pretty good.
i kinda wanna see more of her and her father interactions a bit really show how their relationship got bad and toxic and possibly a redemption arc for her dad but your story either way
also wow Percy being rejected by Mimi previously was hard to read I hope we see my boy get a win with someone lol
overall great chapter and character growth by Mimi and her ever growing control over her power but growth of her darker desires !!!
ps - if I have one request in terms of what to see more of then I’ll definitely say vore and maybe odor or something like that maybe there’s a goddess of laziness lol but that my personal opinion but again you do you!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, I'm glad that you like it so far!
Characters wise I will do my best to expand on everybody, but the cast of characters is rapidly growing and I still have quite a few more of them who have yet to be introduced. You will probably see more of Mimi's father for sure, but for the other characters who may end up neglected I do plan on having some side stories after the conclusion of the first installment of this series.