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Reviewer: LittleBigPlanet Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2024 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Reckless

I really like the world-building in the story so far especially when they ride the stag beetles with reins made of spider silk. However, I was hoping for a bit more interaction in this chapter with the mother and daughter (Eg: The little girl or the mother actually picks them up making things a lot more chaotic). That would be my suggestion for the future.   



Author's Response:

Thanks for the suggestion! I already have a couple of chapters ready but there will be some interaction with one of them in the next one :) Looking back, I think I could have done even more but it's definitely a good lesson to learn for future stories or chapters.

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