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Reviewer: 1337noob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2024 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Confrontation (Mimi)

An excellent chapter showcasing the dynamics between Mimi and Iggy, although based on Iggy's demeanor here I'm curious if she'll eventually find a human she likes to keep around and play with; she seems like she could do it if she tried (and learnt more about kindness from Mimi).

Also, it'll be interesting to see Mimi's reaction when she finds out Ryan already knows she's now a goddess.


Finally, methinks Mimi has a more...lewd side that she doesn't want to admit to. Perhaps she'll be the one to solve Amara's quandary of creating a child between a goddess and human...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.


I'm glad that you are finding the characters interesting so far. Mimi, Iggy and Amara are all characters that I intend to expand more on, so you can look forward to their development in the future.

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