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Reviewer: It Was Me Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2024 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 4: Enough

Oh Aaron, those words are going to haunt you, especially with the way Kim has been acting recently.

You know, despite him not being mentioned once in this chapter, I thought about Charlie a lot as I was reading it. Seeing Kim fully embrace her dominance streak had me thinking about what might have been had the production assistant not encouraged her to give into those urges she's having. What if she had come back to the room, to Aaron, at the start of the chapter as vulnerable as she had been on the beach with Charlie, just like Aaron expected?

Maybe Kim would have still gone full domme and kept treating Aaron more like a thing than a boyfriend. But perhaps they would have had a talk about the struggles they're having with her size and how unsafe everyone feels around her. Maybe she would have decided that she didn't want to be viewed as a monster and would focus on trying to be safer and not taunting  her housemates. Maybe, just maybe, Aaron would have helped her find a way to satisfy her urges without making him fear for his life.

So thank you, Charlie (is it possible to be both sarcastic and sincere at the same time, because I think I just did it).

Kim was ridiculously hit throughout this chapter. From slamming Aaron against the wall and shoving her tongue in his mouth to pretend sleeping as she rolled on top of of him, she was dominant in a way that was as playful as it was ominous, which is a really hard vibe to pull off.

And the she made him into her own living sex toy, even at less than twice his size, was incredible! She treated him more like a thing for her to use than a person, and his feeling that complying is just easier kept things consensual yet hopeless. The fact that she thinks she can manipulate him sexually also shows that she hasn't crossed that line yet.

But that ending for the chapter, when Kim went from being in total control to Aaron snatching it away (in an emotional sense) by saying the words that would end it, holy shit! She obviously didn't take well to that, as she wanted to be in a relationship where she called all the shots, and I wonder how close she came to seriously hurting him out of anger. We already saw how hard she went just when she was getting him off; I can't imagine how far she'd take it actually trying to di some damage.

You described the size difference between them so well and quite vividly at that. I could really visualize how much bigger than him she is!

It has been quite fun (and kind of tragic) seeing Kim go down this dark road so far, especially with all the off-ramps she's missing along the way. I'm excited to see where things go from here!

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2024 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 4: Enough

Amazing rewrite!

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