Reviewer: Lightning Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2024 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

Amazing story, I literally made an account so I could post a review. This is my favorite story on this site. 

I mostly read this because giga and tera girls were mentioned but I wasn't actually expecting a great plot as well, im invested.

The part that most surprised me was when Ryan separated from mimi, I honestly thought that was someone else's pov at the start of the chapter before it was revealed that it was Ryan who escaped. Though with the one year time skip it now seems he missed mimis entire pregnancy and the birth of his daughter, Ryan is my favorite character in this so I feel pretty bad for him. I hope he gets some cool moments in the next part and a happy reunion. Maybe Ryan saving mimi somehow like how she saved him from the prison, although it was mimis fault he ended up there in the first place lol.

Also about mimi, yeah I kind of saw the red flags even back when she was human and trapped on Lucy with all those people, when they were beating Ryan up, she was going to kill them all if Lucy didn't save him first. But I still didn't expect her to destroy a whole city over Amara being beat up and well her being upset about her defeat as well. Still if that's what she does in that situation, I wonder what she would do if Ryan was hurt. 

Though speaking of Ryan and mimi, I noticed that mimi has never seen Ryan when she is at full size. Like the first time Ryan saw her, mimi couldn't see humans yet and then the next time Ryan escaped before she could see him. I'm guessing when she finally sees him and sees how small he is compared to her, she will probably get very excited to put it mildly. I'm looking forward to more scenes with Ryan and mimi.

I did think things were going to go much smoother when mimi got the domain of origin, but then she gets one win and then just keeps losing after that. It was hilarious that all her following opponents had the perfect counter.

One prediction I had is that, there is more to genesis death.  It seems too suspicious, like she was bombarded for a week straight and no goddess noticed or tried to help her. And Genesis just giving up, sure she didn't want to hurt the humans attacking her but she probably had some idea of the revenge the goddesses would take on humanity after she died. My theory is that there were some goddesses who used the humans and worked with them to kill genesis. The sight of humans and goddesses finally working together as equals towards a shared goal, something that would have made her really happy but the goal was murdering her. That's probably what broke her and maybe she didn't want to ruin their efforts, of them finally coming together. Since it seems even before Genesis death, goddesses and humans probably didn't get along that well. I'm assuming those goddesses then took Genesis power for themselves and then killed the humans they worked with to make sure no else found out. Also another thing I wondered was why didn't the goddess of time just rewind time to before genesis died. 

Anyway once again, just wanted to say this is a fantastic story and now I'm going to read part 2, and I'm looking forward to more chapters. 

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it!

Giga/Tera is my favourite genre as well, so that's why I chose such a topic for my very first story. At first, I really wanted to keep the focus on the giantess interactions and character dynamics, but the plot ended up growing beyond what I originally intended. Hopefully I can find a good balance that makes the story an enjoyable read while still maintaining an interesting storyline in part 2.

Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2024 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

kinda like what J vader said, but i think my suspicion comes more around the fact that mimi is actually a yandere of sorts, and i think as more and more of the human heart of mimi closes and she turns more of a proper goddess like lucy 1000 years ago, i feel like the only one she would really care for is our boy Ryan

I dont know really but this series is too much fun to NOT have a discussion about what the future holds for our two main characters ( though honestly i feel like mimi overshadows ryan right now )

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

So, in Mimi's case, I really wanted to push her as a character by having her struggle with both internal and external challenges. I really love how she has turned out so far, but you may be right that I ended up neglecting Ryan's character development in the process. Emotionally and mentally, he hasn't significantly changed that much since the start of the series, besides finding out he was in love with Mimi and discovering his kinks.

Good news is you will be seeing more of him in Part 2, so hopefully I will be able to flesh out his development more. Maybe by giving him more agency instead of just having him fulfill the passenger/spectator role.

Reviewer: Braden697 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2024 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

Where do you want me to contact you?

Author's Response:

You can try this email: gtswrath@gmail.com

Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2024 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

I have decided to revive back from the dead again because im going to bump my rating to this to a TEN out of ten, it still has what i liked and i was just mostly concerned with how you will write mimi's parts.

If i had to say something about it, its that you wrote it almost exactly as i would, it feels like after chapter 10 i had a clear vision of what you were doing and i can see how the future chapters would work out!

With how mimi is being written theres always excitement on the next release on the work as we eagerly wait for what will happen to her, And especially how Ryan will factor in to this as he doesnt know that he is pretty much the most important human at this moment.

You got me hooked and you got me hooked really good now, i have never been this interested in a size work as much as yours before, keep it going!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!

I hope that I can continue to keep the story engaging and do the characters justice.

Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2024 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

Firstly, something needs to be said on how you made me log in into my account again to write this review, as i dont usually log in on my account anymore on this site, so the fact that this is even here is surprising 

but to be honest, im a big sucker for these kinds of stories, where we have immensely overpowered apponents our main character has no hope of beating, insane scales on sizes, and maybe even some corruption/saviour plot going on with the female lead mimi, its just great.

THOUGH, as i said all of that, id rate this a 8/10, i think the story is great, but i just feel like theres something missing, i dont know what that missing thing is but i do know that what it is can really bump this to a 9 for me, Really impressive stuff for your first work here on the site!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the genuine review!

I'm happy to see that you are enjoying the story so far, I'll do my best to keep improving. There are a lot of concepts and character dynamics I'm still looking to explore, so I hope that I still have something up my sleeves that will impress you. I'm still new to writing stories so any feedback is greatly appreciated!

Reviewer: HornyHolo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2024 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)

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