[Report This]Date: September 13 2024 7:11 PM Title: Punishment
10/10 - this story, particularly this chapter, is the GOAT. Bravo. Excellent writing coupled with a story arc seemingly tailored to my highly specific fantasies. I long for the launch of each chapter. Please don’t stop!
Also, if you have a minute, could you briefly describe Tricia? You’ve alluded to the fact that she is a knockout, but a bit more color would remove the pixelation her face unfortunately adorns in my imagination. No pressure if not.
Thanks for this amazing tale!
Author's Response:
Awesome! Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm curious, what's your highly specific fantasy? This story pretty much mixes all my favorite kinks and my wife has been enjoying everything between Sofia and Miguel.
So ... Tricia ... I purposefully haven't explained what she looks like, because I don't know what she looks like, haha. On my Discord, I have a channel where people suggest how'd they cast the characters in my story. Some suggest the part of Tricia be cast as either Jenna Ortega or Chloe Bennet. I think both are great. But yeah, I didn't detail her looks, so that the reader can imagine whatever they want.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2024 11:35 PM Title: Punishment
Wow, what an incredible story! I have been following the stories on this site for a long time, but I never felt the need to create an account to comment until now. All the characters are created with so much care, each with their own personalities, tastes, and interests!
Besides the obscene parts, which are not just gratuitous fan service but something well-written and thoughtfully crafted, addressing many styles with a lot of care and detail!
I am from Brazil and I can read with the help of Google translation tools.
Thank you for creating something sensational!
Author's Response:
Yooooo, thank you for taking the time to register and comment! It really means a lot to me, to hear this kinda stuff. It's insane that you're translating the whole story so you can enjoy it. That's some commitment there, and again, I feel so humble that not only are you translating the story, but that you're enjoying it too.
It's been fun to write. Getting my imagination on paper and then sharing it with the community is a passion of mine. I'm stoked to hear that you've been sticking around for so long. I hope you'll enjoy future chapters. Again, thanks for leaving a comment!