[Report This]Date: December 02 2024 12:20 AM Title: School Days
That principal does not mess around! I couldn’t have thought of a more suitable punishment for Tricia’s mom. Lin might have become bored at some point but you just know that that principal would never let her go.
It’s also nice to see that Sofia finally finds herself in a non-toxic relationship. I liked that her fat ass also finally got some attention. Thanks mxp20, J Vader prime
Author's Response:
I originally intended to write more about Lin, but somehow the story never sways in that direction. And you're probably right, I don't know if Sullivan would give up Melissa after having so much fun with her.
And yeah, I think many people are happy for the new Sofia. All that ass was because of J-Vader, lol.
Date: November 08 2024 8:48 AM Title: School Days
Love this chapter!
We definitely need a mother and son night. Kinda miss the mom and son dynamic and to see how much Sofia has grown , plus she’s needs some company and comfort. Would definitely enjoy Sofia asking for a foot rub after a long day of work from Mateo, or trying to get him to drink some more of her milk.
Date: November 04 2024 8:31 PM Title: School Days
Nothing useful for me to say, but I have to give you pat on the back.
Keep going, please!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your support!
[Report This]Date: November 03 2024 2:50 AM Title: School Days
Now that the dust has settled, I can now review this without feeling like I gave away a spoiler.
First off, I love how the "Scooby gang" is coming together to help out the unregistered though I feel that their biggest undertaking is coming.
I also like the misadventures the adults are having despite the dilemma that has happened.
One thing I would say is that Sofia for sure needs professional help. Yes, karma has paid her a visit but if she wants to get through this and be a efficient DSS agent, that will definitely help her.
I love the overall plot but do you think we'll see a hijinx chapter in the future? I get the feeling when the finish line is crossed for them, they'll need a break.
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for your comment!
The story is heading for a conclusion, and we'll see all the arcs come together. (I think.) So, there won't be anymore hijinks with them. (I think.)
You made me laugh referring to the teens as the Scooby Gang, lmao. They are kinda like that, huh? Trying to do the right thing, while the adults cause a bunch of drama. And for Sofia, she doesn't strike me as the type of person that would seek professional help. In Sofia's mind, she doesn't think she's done anything wrong.
Date: October 20 2024 6:01 PM Title: School Days
Great Chapter, I think there is more to Melissa than we think. She may have some powerful friends me thinks. I thought the violence you did was really well done, the power a giant has over someone 2 inches tall was so well portrayed.
I find it more exciting when the bad guys have the upper hand all the way up until the end. And I really hope the end is a long way off, this is a great story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments! Melissa is still a mysterious character, and her future is murky. We'll see what happens.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2024 12:27 AM Title: School Days
This is the best story of its type in a long time. These characters are fleshed out so well.
I'm relieved Beth got Kamila from the clutches of Tricia. Call me simple, but I like how nice Beth treats the downsizers. Tricia gave me anxiety because I thought Kamila could be a goner at any second. Beth, in contrast makes me happy.
The story arc I like the most is Miguel, Luna, Sophie,
Evie and Liam. Liam is the shit. Does everything in a moral way for nice
downsizers. As for the bad ones, I don't think he's having enough fun
eating them. I wonder about how or why his cock is the last thing some
of them see. Is it a simple crushing?
Miguel is another
favorite character. I love that he is sickened by men's cocks--except
for Liam's, apparently. Miguel is tortured but becoming more evolved. He's the tiny man with the huge personal growth. He realized his poor choice in marrying Sophie. Maybe it took her being thousands of times his size for him to see it clearly.
Poor Liam. Lately, he doesn't seem to get in on the action between Luna
and Miguel. For some reason, he's happy just to watch. If I were Liam, I
wouldn't just watch. I'd have Evie or Sophie give me a handjob and aim
right at Luna and Miguel. Or maybe insert them vaginally just before
having sex. Of course, Liam would ask first because he is so sensitive
to the feelings of Luna and Miguel. Miguel would pretend not to like it. But we know he'd love it.
Author's Response:
Yooooooooooo! Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate your support!
It's awesome to see Kamila in excellent hands, huh? She'll be a lot safer with Beth -- that big bully has a heart of gold and will take care of all downsizers that need the help.
I also like the Miguel/Sofia arc as well. It's especially fun now that Evie is in the mix. And yeah, that line about Liam was because of his preferred method of execution. Miguel has grown a lot, and isn't too worried about being near Liam -- since Liam helped him a lot and is a true bro. And you're right, it took Sofia being a giant to show her true colors. Good for him for leaving.
That stuff you mention about Liam just watching ... haha, yeah, he's been getting blue-balled a lot. He just wants to have fun with the downsizers. Now that Miguel is a lot cooler, and with Evie around, maybe he'll get more chances. That last thing you said about Miguel actually liking an orgy made me laugh. Haha, yeah, I think he would like it!
Thanks again for your Ko-Fi tip! It means a ton to me!
[Report This]Date: October 10 2024 11:52 PM Title: School Days
I am loving this series. Well done with the writing on this. It keeps a really put together idea and keeps you hooked in. Been a while since I read something that I actually followed the storyline, and not just the fetish parts. You keep a really good balance with both of those.
I really want everything to turn out a happy ending for all, but I am also very curious about what might happen when the baddies get their way. This last chapter where Liam calls Sofia just a roommate was awesome. Thinking she was in control and hot shit, just to be shot down for once. This is the kind of story that is perfect. Something that you wants to read more to see if Sofia has her way with Luna and Miguel when Liam isn't looking, or will Liam finally step in and help Miguel out. I want to know what will happen next. Plus the build up with what Tricia might do if she gets her way. Chef's kiss with the anticipation.
All in all, this story has been great. I hope you keep going with it for as long as you can. Keep up the great story telling and amazing work!
Author's Response:
Your comment means so much to me! Thank you for taking the time to write and provide feedback.
I don't want to spoil the ending, not that I can't since I don't know what will happen, but I think everyone will have a somewhat happy ending. All this bad stuff can't go unpunished. Karma will catch up. Like Liam referring to Sofia as a roommate! Hahah. I'm glad to hear the story has you hooked. I'm hooked writing it, and enjoying it along with everyone else.
I'll post part 2 soon. But yeah, I can't wait to see what's happening with Tricia. She's in for some explosive content.
Thank you again for the kind words!
Date: September 15 2024 4:06 AM Title: School Days
@ jfgts2022 Jesus Christ I would hatif they became Tricia's slaves,if anything I hope Tricia shrinks and gets placed in Beth's custody.
Because I know despite everything Beth probably won't kill her so it would make a Very interesting dyanmic(Especially if what she does to Camila and her dad get's uncovered)
Beth would hate her very being but wouldn't kill or even maim or torture her but could still hold her life in her hands and excercise control over every facet of her pathetic worthless life.
Beth would be in the position to excercise her contorl over Tricia, being the better person that holds dominion over her entire little existance,while fighting the urge not the snuff it out like a tiny glimmering flame on a candle...
Man I would read the shit out of that.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2024 4:00 AM Title: School Days
Love Mateo's relationship with both Beth and Sofia. It seems like both those women have come close to downsizing, and since they remained human, really value their size.
Intrigued by the Tricia story and interested in how the 3 storylines will intersect.
Quality writing with frequent updates for a good story? You're in the trifecta - keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you, thank you for your comment and review! I try my best, and this beast of a story has been challenging, but fun to write. I'm so happy to hear others are enjoying it!
Yeah, the three arcs will eventually intersect. I love the drama that's going on between everyone, and how everyone interacts with downsizers differently.
Again, thanks for the kind words. I hope you enjoy what I got set for the future!
[Report This]Date: August 31 2024 11:30 PM Title: School Days
just when I thought you're already going all out with Beth and Mateo, you did it again! Love the intense last part. Hell, even the little Tricia moment is such a nice tease for what's next, I could only wonder what's gonna happen.
Author's Response:
Damn, you read that fast, haha! Thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: August 17 2024 5:34 AM Title: School Days
Holy c*** I really do like your story. The world been building. Please do not end it any time soon. I hope that you keep writing more. Happy fun times too I like how you mix it in and tell other stories too I love how not all characters are evil one-dimensional characters too like the main character's mom. I understand why she was very possessive. It's very easy to see why I don't like how you didn't clear up. The fact that he was partially at fault like he never contacted her when he was with his friends until she picked him up. I would at least text and call her and let her know. She was fine. She was in the right there, but the brain washing was too far and with her husband she should never have been mad with him if she knew her breast milk. I'm assuming she'll find out later. Had a effect on him.Maybe she doesn't think bodies.What does the interesting to see what happens, especially with Luna if she brings it up and says yeah, he was pretty much high when that happened.Will she feel guilty?Will they make up?I can understand why she was angry at the moment.She just doesn't understand
Author's Response:
Regarding Sofia, I'm a fan of show and don't tell. I'm showing you her actions and it's up to you whether you like her or not. I don't mind if she's unlikeable or even hated. She is who she is. And Mateo and her Miguel just have to deal with it. She kinda understands her milk makes downsizers cling to her, but she doesn't fully understand what's going on. It will be cleared up soon.
Thank you for your comment and I'm happy to hear you're enjoying. The world building has been fun and I wouldn't mind living there myself, haha.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2024 2:09 AM Title: School Days
This story puts the whole fantasy in perspective. Great job...please keep it going and keep it real!
Author's Response:
Yoooo, thank you! I already got another chapter almost complete :)
[Report This]Date: August 17 2024 12:36 AM Title: School Days
I almost did not read this story based on the description, but I am certainly glad I did. I've enjoyed it very much and am definitely interested in how Sofia and her husband end up. Keep up the great work! (BTW your request to comment motivated me and you have the honor of being my first comment here. I've been in the shadows for many years here :)
Author's Response:
Well, I do feel honored anytime a lurker gives me their first comment! Thank you for taking the time to let me know what you think. It means a lot to me. I'm curious about how I can improve the story description. I've been fiddling with it for so long, trying to capture the essence of the story. If you have any suggestions, I'm all ears. Thank you again for commenting!
Date: July 20 2024 1:14 PM Title: School Days
Anticipating the next chapter, I hope it isn't to far away.
Date: July 12 2024 11:00 AM Title: School Days
Hi! I have been on this site for minimum 10 years now if not more juste reading stories. This is the first review I am doing on this site.. I just want to let you know that your stories are fantastic! You are my favorite author by far! I like all of your stories and all of your characthers. I enjoyed Beth a lot but I started enjoying Sofia as well. I think I have a thing for latina moms punishing their sons/familly or worshippers.. cant Wait to see what she Will Do next and what Will Melissa Do next on your other story. You are my favorite author and I just hope you continue to Write as you do right now and wont change because of other reviews.. Thank you for the adventure provided on those stories!
Author's Response:
THANKS!!! I don't mind the other reviews. Sorry if I led anyone thinking this was a 100% gentle story.
I always love it when people create an account or tell me they're reviewing for the first time. It feels special to me when I get people out of their shells to comment. I'm so happy to share my weird imagination with others, and that others like it too. Thank you for your comment! It really means a lot to authors when we get them!
Date: July 11 2024 10:41 PM Title: School Days
I realized I came across as a bit rough in my review and I didn't want to be bashing you like that. I'm not calling this piece garbage, but there definitely were some misplaced expectations when I picked up this story and it's not necessarily meant for me, which is fine. (I think maybe you should consider expanding the story's description to make it more clear about some of the elements of the story.)
Sofia does make sense for the most part, but what makes her feel wrong to me is how she just doesn't seem to consider how she's impacting Mateo. It would make more sense if she was jumping through hoops justifying her actions to herself and at least considering how much she ruined Mateo's life like this. He never wanted to be downsized in the first place and that should be in the background of everyone's minds at least. The reason why I have my opinion of her is that she forced her son to be downsized, kidnapped her son, and is definitely abusing Miguel. This is all just my thoughts: the best way I can characterize her is as a villian/person she is Umbridge not Voldemort. And that's cool, but part of the appeal (to me at least) of Umbridge style characters is how they'll get their comeuppance and it doesn't seem like that's the direction it's going. And again, that's fine but it's not for me. (I'll also admit I don't like overbearing mothers as a character in any story, that's again my personal preference. )
Author's Response:
Sofia may or may not understand the trauma she's imparting on Mateo. As someone who was raised by an immigrant mother, and has seen firsthand accounts of overbearing mothers treating their kids, the punishments she's inflicting on Mateo are realistic. Obviously, they're wrong. Sofia thinks her actions are best for her son, but I'm sure everyone reading the story understands it's not. She's permanently scarring Mateo and Miguel, and once those two survive this, they'll probably have lifelong PTSD.
I don't understand your Harry Potter reference, but I get the need to have the protagonist getting their comeuppance in the end. Will karma catch up with Sofia? I don't know. In real life, bad guys just get away with evil shit all the time because the world is a cruel place. And as someone who writes in the moment, I really don't know what will happen to Sofia. We'll see if her character changes for the better.
With all that said, you're probably right that this story isn't for you. It's going to remain gritty and probably get crueler as time moves on. I have written some endearing, heartfelt moments, but downsizers are going to get hurt before this story is finished.
I took your advice and updated the synopsis so that people are 'tricked' into reading a different kind of story. I've been meaning to do this, and this was the perfect opportunity to fix that.
[Report This]Date: July 11 2024 5:15 PM Title: School Days
There are parts I like and some things are not my preference like M content. I would like more feet content and is there a chance they could have a special group that gets shrunk smaller? I did love the ending of the last chapter and I'm eagerly awaiting the continuation.
Author's Response:
Yeah, just skip the Liam chapters if you don't like that stuff. Unfortunately, for some people, I like M content.
And I haven't ruled out doing smaller people! Micro is another favorite of mine.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2024 2:06 PM Title: School Days
I don't know how you keep hitting home runs with these stories my dude. Seriously good.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2024 1:21 PM Title: School Days
Man the dynamic between Sofia and her family is really damn good!
Keep on the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's gonna get more intense in the next chapter. I'm really proud where the story is going!
[Report This]Date: July 07 2024 12:44 PM Title: School Days
Excellent stuff! Looking forward to part two on Wednesday, LOL.
Author's Response:
Hhahaha. Less than 24 hours after I published, and the goal was met. See, you guys do care :D :D :D
I'll upload part II on Wednesday. I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to it.