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Reviewer: gtsfan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2024 1:36 AM Title: A Cutting Edge Company

Thanks for the insight into Andra.  Didn't know about the estranged husband. Explains a lot.  I had to head over to your archive to read the latest version of "Melts in your mouth".  Thanks for mentioning that.  Looking forward to seeing her in "Tiny Tinder".
https://aryion.com/g4/view/922286




Author's Response:

Ha ha. I did end up taking a portion of your suggestion to heart and added that element at the end (with the bike), although I named him Josh instead of Rodger and he was more of a pest to her than an actual seduction. But thanks for the idea.

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