Date: November 20 2023 8:18 PM Title: Helpful Assistant
I'm really loving the different dynamics between the bigs and tinies each chapter. It's all very playful, and there's this underlying energy of everyone being into the power dynamic even if they won't openly admit it.
The prank chapter was a lot of fun, especially them getting caught by HR and her being secretly into it. The description of Jennifer sitting on him was really good too. I think the brevity of it was to it's favor, just a short and sweet episode in the office.
Chapter 4 was good too. It was cool seeing how Sasha and Marcus both depend on each other. I love Marcus' enthusiasm for fulfilling his duties as operations assistant/stress relief/ fidget toy, as well as how considerate Sasha is in juxtaposition to how she physically treats him, which just loops back to my praise regarding the office dynamic.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the praise!
That's what I'm going for, little slice of life stories with bigs and tinies working together with a fun power dynamic that's enjoyed, rather than feared by those within it. Cute giant office ladies treating their tiny coworkers both as toys and as reliable coworkers, bosses, subordinates and friends. I appreciate the feedback and I hope to do more with these characters because I really like them.
Next chapter should be really fun so I hope you enjoy!