[Report This]Date: September 06 2024 5:38 AM Title: Tuesday Morning
Hey, just want to add after reading you newest edit, if you as the author don't enjoy or feel like you'd rather not include the insertion scene, I'd advocate removing it then. While I enjoy he power dynamic personally, you write well enough to create a great story without it.
All in all, it's still a great story, no matter how you decide, that's just my two cents
Author's Response: At the end of the day, I decided I didn’t really want to do any major rewrites, so I left the scene it. I did, however, break it up into 2 chapters. I’m finishing up my current proofreading and should have the next day’s chapters posted by the end of the week.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2023 1:42 PM Title: Tuesday Morning
I like this chapter. I like how Aunt Julia is starting to become more aggressive with her sexual behaviors. She knows how to use her body even if the other person is tiny. I wonder if she will find some way to blackmail Tim to be quiet about what she is doing. Offers a deal to make things better but records it to make Tim look bad.
I hope that she does more stuff with breasts. Maybe something with the nipple.
Author's Response:
First off, If I haven’t mentioned it before, I really like the trope of having a giant character being playful, overbearing, and/or aggressive towards a tiny individual, and I want Julia to become gradually more aggressive over time, but I also want this change to seem natural and not just jump to “cartoonishly evil”.
Secondly, I did have a critique about why Tim doesn’t just come out and tell Natalie about his treatment, so I will be really trying to develop the threats and blackmail aspects of the story moving forward to justify his silence. Hopefully, I can create something that will at least be somewhat believable.
While I hadn’t specifically considered nipple play in this story, I might be able to add something in.😉
In any case, thanks for reading; I appreciate the review!