[Report This]Date: June 28 2024 11:56 PM Title: Monday Afternoon
Still really enjoying he story, reads fantastically well and has a really nice flow to it.
I'm curious whether you'll change any of the character dynamics? Like will Julia be more playful and less cruel towards tim, or is it that it's ramping?
Either way, great to see you back!
Author's Response: Yeah, being the perfectionist that I am, I decided to go back and add in some details to the story to make the epilogue work, and since I was doing that, I decided to make some updates and edits to help the story flow better. I really want Julia’s transition from playful to cruel seem more natural, and that’s going to require some reworking of some critical elements of the story, including the dialogue. I’m hoping everything will flow a bit better once I’m finished.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2023 9:33 PM Title: Monday Afternoon
Loving the story so far, looking forward to the next chapter. Any chance that Natalie putting her feet up on the coffee table without a thought of Tim, gave Julia some ideas for future punishments or ways for her to change Natalie’s comfort level? I’ll admit I was kinda hoping Natalie would smell the scent of the foot lotion coming from Tim and ask a few questions that Julia could use in her favour.
Author's Response:
Well, Julia will certainly be exploring a few other ways she can take advantage of having her tiny nephew literally at her feet, and the week is only just beginning. I’m certainly not going to give any specific details of what the rest of the week will bring, but rest assured, I’m planning on a little bit of everything, so there should at least be some chapters that everyone can enjoy.
The whole lotion scenario is one that I don’t think I’ve ever seen in any of the stories I’ve read, so there’s a lot of room to explore. I do kind of like the idea of Natalie noticing the smell of lotion on her tiny son, but you also have to remember the that that whole incident happened earlier in the day long before Natalie returned home. Thanks for the suggestion, though. I’m certainly going to consider that in my future works.
Thanks for reading!