[Report This]Date: January 15 2023 11:09 AM Title: Alternate ending C - The darkest timeline
Amber is back! One of the hottest things i ever read, the way you describe the growth in this was soooo good i could really feel amber growing in front of me, i love your descriptions and creative ideas.
I absolutely love the detail of turning one of ambers eye golden from the syringe turning her into some kinda half goddess with the golden eye SO GOOD!!
i also appreciate how smooth you worked in vasquez and jennifers conversation about the g38 in chapter 20
i might need to re-read jennifers win after this for some redemption
Thanks for the alternative endings, loved them alot! 😇
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm really glad I was able to deliver on this chapter to be honest. It's taken such a long time to get back to writing 😅
Hahaha, yeah the two alternates are kind of like yin and yang (which wasn't 100% planned).
And, you're very welcome! Thank you for sticking with the story and always reading/reviewing!
[Report This]Date: January 14 2023 2:05 PM Title: Alternate ending C - The darkest timeline
Well worth the wait!
Both of the alternate endings were incredibly satisfying in their own way, especially with the triple-digit growth. I'm hoping we get to see that kind of progression for Vasquez in the sequel. Loved the different responses of the characters in their methods of getting rid of their former competition and the descriptions of how the G38 affected them.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so, so much! I was very worried that things would get very samey and be boring but it looks like they diverged enough to keep people at least somewhat engaged!
It was actually a ton of fun writing the what if scenarios! The last one might have been the most fun actually. I could just go full evil and let Amber do anything, haha
Thank you for sticking with the story from the beginning! Your reviews (and everyone's) played a big role in keeping me motivated :)