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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2022 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Car Accident!

Yep!  I was right.  His brain is still reorienting, itself.  Great editing job!  :-)  

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Date: December 28 2022 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Car Accident!

I thought you had renamed his college "Bullet Bay University."



Author's Response:

I went back and edited chapters 4 and 5, thanks for pointing out the errors. It is now Bullet Bay University, and is located in fictional Matheson county, California.

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