[Report This]Date: December 05 2022 1:06 AM Title: Going Clubbing
Wow, if a ookamimimi is 9 feet tall when a nekomimi like Tanji is 2 feet tall, I'm curious how big something like an ushimimi (cowgirl) would be in this world. Would be funny if the expression 'milk truck' is literal rather than figurative when referring to the bosom of a holstein-girl. Also, Cinnamon... Mia is really cute. Depicting cuteness is incredibly difficult, but I feel you nailed it with her; she's both adorable and amusing. Your skills as a writer make it easy for me to visualise the various scenes as illustrations.
We're already at chapter 4, and I'm already intrigued and captivated by this world you're sharing. If this were a book, it would be a real page-turner that's hard to put down. It's the perfect blend of size-fetish science fiction. Hopefully others feel the same way; if it ever feels like the reader response here is akin to cricket chirps, I'll be more than glad to give you a shout-out elsewhere to help draw in more readers. You have something really good going on here.
Author's Response:
I am glad that you are enjoying the story! As this is my first attempt at writing a long-form tale like this, I am happy that it is going well.
I find your idea of cowgirls being used to produce milk very funny. The main character could for example see a little image of a cowgirl on the bottles of milk he drinks every day and realize that it is actually a ushimimi milk instead of a cutesy marketing character.
Wow, thank you for the offer! I would be grateful if you could give me a shout-out. Seeing feedback is always a great motivator to keep going.
I appreciate your continued support.
-Silicon