Reviewer: bustyshrink Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2022 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

This story is fantastic!! Such a perfect setup and plot device for the shrinking. And you do such a great job of setting us up with a protagonist it’s so fun to watch bad luck happen to. 

Reviewer: FrostyJane Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2022 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 17

Really great story. There was plenty of setup, it didn't feel rushed, and it didn't feel like a slog. Still hoping to see more of Vicky, hopefully a lot more, and hoping to see Michelle continue with her revelation that she could use Mike to basically make giantess content for a while, all the while Mike continues to get messed with by Cindy and Doug. Absolutely fantastic.

Where this story falls off is that the characters started out very believable, but turned into tools for smut fiction all too quickly. I would have liked to see more realistic, reasonable behavior from all of them. We saw how much Cindy loved Mike and supported him, even through the disappointment of his size changing, but she took revenge so nonsensically quickly without even a word to him. From the way she had been written up until that point, I very much expected her to ask him about it first and mostly believe him when he said it was his sister.

I also would have liked to see more emotion from Mike. Through all the betrayal, all the pain, the only thing he ever shows is anger. With all he was going through, I really wanted to see him show genuine sadness and sorrow to his sister about the way she was treating him, and for her to open up a bit to him and feel really sorry for the way she was abusing her own brother.

We're here now though, and I'm not upset about it. What I want to see from the rest of this story is, first, all the things from my first paragraph. Then I'd love to see Mike grow back and seek the death penalty for all of them, if not simply kill them himself, as well as that company clearly abusing human rights to go down. With the way Mike is written, and the utter, inhuman terror they submitted him to out of fucking nowhere, I wouldn't be surprised if he grew back, immediately bought a weapon, and just murdered them all. He gets arrested for murder and sentenced to prison, and from the information made public through the trial, the company gets taken down and the doctors arrested.

Anyways, that's my take. Can't wait for me, no matter what you do with it. It's all good fun. :)