[Report This]Date: October 20 2022 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 15: Vendetta
Another great chapter. I’m really loving Amber’s scenes here, hope we get to see a lot more of her rampage before the conclusion.
As for fighting fire with fire, I’m incredibly torn on who would be the best option, but am actually leaning towards Jennifer, just so she gets a chance to be the biggest for once.
Whoever you choose though, I’m sure it will be great!
Author's Response:
Thank you! The next chapter is almost done and it has a lot of of Amber and her activities!
I have a plan in mind for how this all happens buuuut, I might do a poll and do an alternate ending for fun too 🤔
Date: October 17 2022 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 15: Vendetta
great story! i hope Jennifer gets the G38
Author's Response:
Interesting! I might have to make a poll to see who people want to grow the most. I didn't think Jennifer have much backing but I could be wrong!
[Report This]Date: October 17 2022 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: Vendetta
A concentrated dose....I wonder who that could go to XD
I mean I haven't made my desires a secret, it has to go to Vasquez she's the biggest (besides Amber) so giving it to her would make sense in order to right fire with fire.
I hope she grows to be as big as Amber at least (or better yet, bigger XD) just wanting to see her beat Amber into a bloody pulp, or under her foot would be a fun read.
I mean....Amber is a nazi....and is brutal. The way you wrote the brutal scenes is again well written though, you really did a great job painting a picture of her actions.
When she had the prisoner Wendy in her grip, I thought she was going to pop/destroy her boobs with her fingers like squashing grapes, but having her slam her between her now giant breasts was more fitting (in her own fucked up/sadistic mindset)
Again, I love that Vasquez knows something was up with Jennifer not getting her dose, and knowing there was something going on.
I can't wait to read more! (again, Vasquez has to reclaim her title as biggest bitch XD)
And Smith!! That bald bastard needs to get his own comeuppance for his actions.....and I hope it hurts :)
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I love how invested you are in the characters! I won't spoil anything but yeah, Amber and Smith have to get their just desserts.... Right? 👀
I did wonder if Amber should be even more brutal with Wendy's boobs, but thought it was best to shy away from it. I'm doing my best to walk the line of brutality without being gratuitous 😅