[Report This]Date: September 24 2022 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 13: A headless snake can still bite
Such a great chapter. I’d say that the fun starts now, but this story has been a joy to read all the way through.
Loved the descriptions of the more violent acts, personally I really like the crueler side of things, so hopefully there’s a lot more of it.
Eager to see if someone else is gonna need to get a whole lot bigger now to deal with this new problem.
Also, given that we might now be approaching those kinds of scales, I’d love if the excessive eating required started to extend to more than just the inmate’s food, especially given how much I enjoyed the previous consumption scenes. If hard vore isn’t on the books though, that’s totally understandable.
In any case, can’t wait to see more!
Author's Response:
I'd not even considered vore in this story to be honest. I'm not against writing about it at all, but it wasn't something I imagined. I'll think about it though, haha. I can totally imagine omega Amber eating people in a bid to fuel more growth. Even if I don't go forward with it in this story I'll explore it in another sometime.
I'm glad you liked the more cruel side of things though! Very happy with the response I've gotten since I was so worried initially.
Overjoyed that you've liked everything so far and the 'fun' has been throughout!
Date: September 21 2022 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 13: A headless snake can still bite
Wow! This chapter was hot 😈 the growth description was on point and so well done, i persoanlly dont mind the graphic moments u mentioned at all it really helpes portray amber as evil. Seriously i cant express myself enough to tell you how good this story is to me. 😇
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you! That really means a lot, I'm super happy that you're enjoying it so much.
And yeah, big, ultra evil Amber is fun to write about. I was going to be more descriptive but pulled back 😂 Still, I'm glad it wasn't off putting as is and portrays Amber as the villain she is!
[Report This]Date: September 19 2022 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 13: A headless snake can still bite
Amber is such an evil bitch....
Like when she had Jennifer and was threatening to crush her...
I knew she would be returning, but didn't think it would be in such a big....(that was not meant to be a pun) way.
And damn...now she's chugging down the G37 at such a rate...
Jennifer needs Vasquez, and Vasquez needs to get her hands on some more of the formula too, she has to put Amber in her place (or take her out permanently)
There can only be one biggest bitch in cell block B and it's Vasquez XD
Seriously though this chapter was again well written, did have some serious graphic moments, but with a character like Amber that seemed inevitable.
It was still well written and again you just paint a vivid picture of the growth and actions of these giant women.
I am on the edge of my seat, can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Yeah I took a long time debating about the graphic violence and including it, but as you said, with someone like Amber and a setting like this, it kind of was inevitable. I still tried not to be too descriptive of it all though.
Anyway, thank you again for the kind words! I won't spoil anything, but as you said, there can only be one (highlander refence fully intended) biggest bitch in cell block B!