Date: September 11 2022 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 12: The start of the end
Another amazing chapter, felt my stomach drop at the thoughts of Vasquez bealive smith about the doses 😭, the suspense is killing me.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm incredibly happy you had such a strong reaction.
You'll find out if Smith's ploy worked eventually 😈
[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 12: The start of the end
Smith is such an asshole!
I hope Vasquez learns the truth about Jennifer's real decision.
He's playing a dangerous game when/if she learns he's lying to her.
I may be having unrealistic expectations, but I want to see Vasquez and Jennifer grow closer and wind up together XD
The scene earlier with Jessica and Jackson was a hot sexual encounter, again you nailed writing the size-sexual dynamic well, and with a new couple (even if just a physical/friends with benefits type setup with them)
Again, hope Jennifer and Vasquez are going to come out ok
And I hope Jennifer is going to be ok! Damn it, Amber is back...
(I'm kinda hoping Vasquez comes to the rescue XD)
So glad I'm finally caught up, loved binge reading every chapter, you've really woven a great story here.
Author's Response:
Hahah, thank you for all the kind words! I love that I got to basically see your reaction to each chapter in real time.
Smith is indeed an asshole! Only time will tell how this affects Vasquez and Jennifer's relationship. With the triangle between them and Trish, I'm hoping to make this interesting!
Also glad you enjoyed the Jessica/Jackson scene! I wanted to have a slightly gentler romance scene instead of the more brutal antics that have been all over the series so far.
So happy you're enjoying it all! There should be a new chapter up this or next week but I'm still planning some of the details!