[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 10: G37 trial - Week 5 part 4
I got the chapters confused XD I thought the previous one was the end of week 5.
But it's still going strong (Like Vasquez)
I loved the section with Jennifer and Rachel (really putting her new height to use)
Vasquez's show of dominance in the canteen was well written, the way she just walked into the other gang territory and started eating their food, a real power move.
And the fight XD It's fun to imagine all of them trying to jump a woman almost twice their size (and with that much muscle!)
Author's Response:
Haha, I won't bombard you with a response to every review but I'll respond to this one specifically! I've had a ton of fun building up the relationship between Jennifer and Vasquez and making the latter a slightly deeper character.
Having Jennifer be slightly corrupted by her Suze has also been a loooot of fun. Her getting little bits of revenge here and there, etc.
I have to also mention Vman2000 was a big help in this chapter, both gifting me with the food tax suggestion and helping edit the fight scene to make much more sense.
I think this and the last chapter might be my two favourites so far!
Really, really happy that you're enjoying this all and invested in the story 😁
[Report This]Date: August 27 2022 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 10: G37 trial - Week 5 part 4
This story just keeps up the high quality content.
Love this chapter, a giantess displaying her dominance through excessive consumption is incredibly hot. I hope Vasquez continues to do it as she gets even bigger and needs even more food.
Also nice to learn some more of Trish’s history and see Jennifer get involved in the fights.
Eager to see how Jennifer will eventually decide who to side with and what she can do with her secret keycard.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Ah man, that really means a lot. When I'm making drafts of the story, I'm usually questioning quality, so reading that makes me feel very happy (and maybe a little silly).
Haha, you can thank Vman2000 for all the eating. He gifted me with the idea and I knew it needed to go in this chapter.
I'm going to try and flesh out all the characters a bit more as we move forwards! A new chapter is up so hopefully you can get more of a read on some people :)
Week 6 will be answering some questions too ;) hope you enjoy it all!
[Report This]Date: August 23 2022 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 10: G37 trial - Week 5 part 4
Oh boy ! Vasquez is a monster/ A sexy, alluring, destructive monster ! Go on Jennifer, tame the beast, make her yours with gentleness - and blond hair !
Author's Response:
In the words of Vasquez: "Its not always blondes!" Alright, maybe it is.
Also, I'm now paranoid I've misspelt blond everywhere...
I won't give away what I've got planned for tri-relationship but hopefully Jennifer can work her light coloured hair magic!