Date: October 01 2024 11:46 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Want to ask if this story is still updated, I really love this story
Author's Response:
The story definitely still going.
I am currently working on a new short story called "How to Hook up with a Pub Gal' that is actually set in the same universe as Antopia. It will have different set of characters but it will have references to Antopia. It will be coming out very soon around next week
[Report This]Date: August 30 2024 12:23 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Hey is me again
This is not a review is just that i forget to rating your story, i hope that you are well and good luck in your work and the new episode come out soon, not pressure just curious but anyway until then......
Bye.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the Extra Stars :)
[Report This]Date: June 02 2024 3:33 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Overall it's good. I would prefer about half the length, posted more often. It's hard to sit down and read it all or have to come back. I'm excited to see more human interaction, the inshoe scene was my favorite part.
Author's Response:
I can understand when you say this chapter was too long. I never wanted it to become this long but I wanted to experiment with all possible giantess interactions I could think of at least once and vore and graphic digestion were the hardest ones to do and really swelled up the word count. It's not the content itself which is the problem but the way it is presented.
I did actually consider splitting it into parts like Chapter 7 Part A, Chapter 7 Part B, etc so that it would be easier to digest for the reader. However, I tend to classify my chapters based on a common element or theme. In this case, it is essentially 5 sub-stories revolving around the common theme of insignificance. In the end, I decided against it because it would look weird and awkward in terms of presentation when compared to the rest of the chapters. I did provide lots of spacing to make it easier to follow.
You can always download a PDF version using the print function above the chapter so that it is easier to bookmark to remember where you left off since this chapter is impossible to read in one sitting. No chapter will ever be close to being this long in the future.
Thanks for saying that the insole smothering and crush scene inside cute Darla's pink Mary Janes with both ant troops was your favourite. That and the violent vore scene with the chocolate easter egg in the kitchen in 1960s Melbourne were my favourite macro interactions to write.
I have both ant-aphid interactions, human-ant interactions and more interestingly human-aphid interactions and human-ant-aphid interactions planned in the next chapter.
Date: March 10 2024 9:20 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Greetings again from Turkey I look forward to your story and can't wait to see more lucy. When will your story be published?
Author's Response:
Hi there 😄
It's hard to say exactly when but I have finished the draft. However, there is a lot to edit, and it's at a snail's pace with the new full-time job I am doing.
For what it's worth there is a lot of Lucy next chapter. 😄
[Report This]Date: February 16 2024 3:48 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
certainly one of the best stories! the views, the description of the cosmic horror that is a child of 7 years!! it's perfect!! please keep the rhythm perfect!!!
Author's Response:
A lot of this story is turning a seemingly innocent cute sweet little girl in normal circumstances into a terrifying monster to the tiny lifeforms below her using vivid descriptions and perspectives so that rhythm is definitely not stopping hahaha 😂 🤣
Date: February 15 2024 5:23 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
i started reading the story now and I found the most!! I hope it continues like this! It is so rare to see young gigantas that I am happy to meet Lucy!!
Please continue !
Author's Response:
Hi there 🙂
Thanks for reviewing and I agree with you that kid giantesses are quite rare but in my opinion, they have some unique interactions to utilize which is what makes kid character development so interesting since they are still growing up. Lucy is a very interesting girl as you will see later on in the story😏.
I am currently quite busy at the moment but I have actually finished the next chapter and currently reviewing it. It should be up by early March.
Date: January 25 2024 5:30 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Ok, my face has turned from red to blue to purple.
Any idea when you will get back to this?
Not to nag, just a huge fan of the story!
Author's Response:
Hi there 😄
I have had some major life changes but I am slowly cracking away at the next chapter. I also have other short stories planned as well this year which should be exciting.
The next chapter should be out in around 2 to 3 weeks (hopefully). It's my best chapter I have written so far and contains a range of macro interactions 😊. It will also be my longest, lol.
[Report This]Date: November 21 2023 3:07 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Hey there, I was going to wait for more of the story to be written before writing anything, but I have to say a few things about this story.
1) I love the imagination here. I've seen some stories that use a mix of creature/humans to write some fun stuff, but you are using mostly unaltered insects here. The idea of making an ant seem attractive somehow is really very good!
2) I love the scenery you have imagined. Admittedly a lot of it is variants on real things, but you have put some very imaginative twists on how things are different. Design/materials. etc.
3) I love how the information about stuff is being developed. Gaia was a human, the ants are aliens. Putting this kind of stuff in the story makes it interesting and adds a lot of great long term future story stuff into the mix.
4) I love that you finally had an erotic scene with the ant and the aphids. I know it was a morality lesson, but hey I really do reading about giant/small interactions sexually, so I enjoyed that part of the story. Maybe a gentle element can be added in later in this regards (flashback to Gaia maybe?)
5) Keep up the pace. I would be very happy to keep seeing updates on this story. It is one that I will click on every day to see if an update happens.
One question, how long do you anticipate the story is going to be given what you have covered so far? Any idea how many chapters you will have given your outline?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing 🙂
I have always loved the concept of talking sentient animals in stories which is what led me to create talking ants that live similar lifestyles to humans but also combine real anthill structural hierarchy and society. Most people focus on human-human interactions or anthropomorphic animals but I like to get creative with human-animal interactions.
With the attractive ant I am assuming you are talking about Princess Penelope, yes she is indeed very gorgeous 😍. We are going to get more intimate with her anatomy later on...
I like to get very descriptive since I am creating a whole new hidden world and society so I am very glad you love the scenery.
Gaia is coming up very soon and we are going to find out exactly who she is and how she found the ants in a chapter backstory.
I am happy you liked the sexually explicit scene with the ant and the aphids. Usually, I focus on feet, crushing and vore macro interactions but I like to expand into more hardcore interactions as well. The ants and the aphids and the humans and the ants were also there to show the true size scale of life and insignificance.
The next chapter should come up next month, hopefully. I have some preparation to do since I graduate from university at the end of the year but the next chapter is already 80% done.
I am estimating this story will be around 30 to 35 chapters and I will be writing this for a good 2 to 3 years based on my outline. But things get interesting so I recommend you stick around for the long haul......
Date: November 19 2023 5:18 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
yes, it would be fun to see it shrunking again, at the size of an aphid. Did you consider this?
Author's Response:
I think I will make him even smaller to aphid-sized temporarily so he can feel puny in the presence of ants and then make him feel even more insignificant by making him have microscopic interactions with humans 🤔
[Report This]Date: November 04 2023 2:20 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Just wanted to say, I love the story so far. It’s really interesting to see the references to old kids movies like the Ant bully and the interactions between the insects in the world and the humans are great and you can really feel the emotion. Can’t wait for the next chapter whenever it comes out!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! The next chapter is already completed but I still need to proofread it which I do shortly after resting from my exams. It should be up at the end of next week
Yeah essentially think of this as the more intense version of Ant Bully which will be a lot darker and violent later on. Hence the R-rating 👌
Date: September 25 2023 12:06 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Where did you go?
Author's Response:
Sorry still here😄. Been a busy semester.
The new Chapter of Antopia will be out around late October/Early November along with two new surprise short stories
Date: July 08 2023 4:54 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Oh well after 7 months the chapter 6 is here. Hope to see the newest ones uploaded asap.. The story is sooo interesting. Did you finish your exams and have more free time?
Author's Response:
Mid-semester exams are finished and it's mid-semester break for me so yes I have had more time to write. I planned out the next chapter already and that will be a lot more action-packed than this one and expanding on the macro/micro-interactions. I will try to have it out in a few weeks 👍.
Date: July 07 2023 2:33 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
How the hell did this story managed to slip past me?
Its awesome!
Author's Response:
Happy to know that you like the story! 😊. I have a lot of exciting chapters planned further down the road.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2023 5:16 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Hello LittleBigPlanet!
I've been following your story since the first chapter has been released and I gotta admit, this is THE story that keeps me coming back to this site. You inspired me to create this account, to write my own stories! (fun fact I had an account before but I deleted it 'cuz i was kinda ashamed of my fetish :/) Keep up the good work and good luck to you academically!
p.s. like what the previous reviewer said, more Asian Giantess content could be cool. I think you already have a potential candidate in the form of Max's classmate, Mei Lin Zhang! Would love to see her interact with some ants or, Max himself!
Author's Response:
Thank you for saying that this is one of your favourite stories on the site! I have a lot planned so you will be coming back to the site a lot more often 😅.
I don't think having an interest in macro content is anything to be ashamed of. That's kind of why I have an anonymous username anyway. I kind of need more than anyone since my real name no one else quite has 😋. No family or friends knows about my secret macro fantasies And I think you should embrace and express yourself.
Thank you very much for wishing me luck for the exam period. I have now finished most of my exams I have 2 more next week. Chapter 6 is ready to go I just need to proofread it so I am estimating it will be out by June 25th or 26th 🙏 💪
Date: May 21 2023 12:30 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Hope to see asap the new chapter, I'd like to see an Asian giantess character... Well, you have already written all the plot, but who knows
Author's Response:
Chapter 6 is actually completed now! 😊 18854 words. I just need to proofread it before I submit it which will be in Early-mid June, just after the exam period is over.
Divya Bandaranayake is the main Asian giantess I introduced in Chapter 3 An Unexpected Visitor. However, I do plan to create more characters so if you want an Asian giantess with an ethnicity from a specific part of Asia feel free to email me. 🙂
Date: April 19 2023 12:56 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Any news about the sixth chapter?
Author's Response:
So I am around 75% of the way through the chapter and it is around 15000 words so it will probably be 20000 words again. The reason why it is taking so long is because I keep having to put it on hold from time to time to prioritize school work.
The good news is that there is a bit of break in work coming up so I can finish it, proofread it then and get it out by next month. 🙂
Date: April 14 2023 6:16 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
I've only read the prologue so far. You described the setting well, and I love the ant army and find it all very funny :)
Author's Response:
Let me know when you get to Chapter 3: An Unexpected Visitor and Chapter 4: Prisoner of the Ant People because that's when it starts getting really interesting 😊
Date: February 28 2023 6:36 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Can't wait to read another chapter.
Author's Response:
Well, the good news is that I have started on Chapter 6 of Antopia and am about 1/3 through it.
The bad news is that uni semester has started so it is going to be a little while
Date: January 28 2023 6:36 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Your work does not go unnoticed great one. We all appreciate the writing.
ps I love love to see another Lucy rampage or the dangerous footstool in the backyard. Maybe some inshoe but still I love the work and keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Lucy's dog Footstool is actually going to have a major role in one of the chapters further down the story and a couple of others as well
Lucy is going to launch several attacks on Antopia so there will be no shortage of rampages
Thanks for saying that my effort in my writing does not go unnoticed!
[Report This]Date: January 26 2023 6:56 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Absolutely incredible and amazing story! Your writing is fantastic, the plot is great, and basically just about everything is perfect! One of the best stories I’ve ever read and I really hope there’s more!
Also, hope that there’s some more butt action in the future. That scene with Jack almost getting crushed is hot.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I tend to keep people interested in both the plot and the erotic elements. So glad that you have enjoyed the plotline of the story so far and believe me when I say it's going to get a whole lot more interesting very soon!
Nice to know that you enjoyed Divya almost flattening criminal scumbag Jack with her bum. I thinking of including more explicit butt action with older female characters later in the story
Thanks for reviewing!