[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 7: G37 trial - Week 5 part 2
Another great chapter.
I loved the talk Vasquez had with Jennifer (and the bit of physical domination when she tried to show her she's not a fighter)
You wrote the later cell scene well too, and the sexual content.
The way you express her size and pure strength (as well as describing her body) is always so descriptive, it's so easy to picture her statuesque form.
And again you also wrote the sexual interaction perfectly.
Vasquez definitely has some soft spots growing for Jennifer, hope they continue to grow.
Date: August 02 2022 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 7: G37 trial - Week 5 part 2
I may be biased but I think it’s only fair that Vazquez gets those two treatments she missed once they get that table sorted. Alongside her regularly scheduled dose of course!
Awesome work Kokoji.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm sure Vasquez and maybe some others would agree ;)
Date: July 28 2022 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 7: G37 trial - Week 5 part 2
Amazing once again
Loved the story from the first 2 chapters but somehow its getting better and better each chapter, as someone that watches alot of prison documentarys this is like the best of both worlds for me lol.
also team Vasquez all the Way!
Author's Response:
Ohhh, I'd love to know more about those documentaries! I may have watched a few but more could always boost the realism :)
And thank you, that really, really means a lot! I've been obsessively writing and rewriting stuff because I'm always worried about standards slipping. I know it's silly but I can't help it 😅
Glad there's a supporter for Vasquez! Villains deserve fans too! With the other ladies slowly catching up, do you think she'll remain queen of the castle?