[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 6: G37 trial - Week 5
Damn, this chapter was intense.
It's great seeing Vasquez actually has some real feelings beyond possessiveness (or possessiveness may be a part of it but there seems to be affection there) for Jennifer.
The fight scene was well done, really could feel Vasquez letting lose.
Great work on this chapter, can't wait to read the next one.
[Report This]Date: July 18 2022 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 6: G37 trial - Week 5
Great story, well written and with some very engaging and some very vile characters. You mentioned it in a response, but the attitude you have conveyed with each of your characters is one of the most enthralling aspects here, I don’t even know who I want to be the biggest at this point.
Hoping the growth arms race continues to escalate and Jennifer gets some opportunities to stand up for herself in the future!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliment! It means a lot to me that you're enjoying the characters and their dynamics so much!
I'm trying my best to make the villains (most of the cast) kind of relatable/understandable too, so I hope that comes across.
Escalate is the precise word for what's going to be happening very soon. Jennifer may or may not be able to stand up for herself. Let's just hope she doesn't get corrupted by power....