Date: November 19 2022 7:56 AM Title: The descision
Nice, I like the set up here for how Anna feels a bit uncomfortable about the ordeal, but ultimately does it anyway.
I wonder why Beatrice called her a pervert though in chapter 1?
Date: July 12 2022 5:43 AM Title: The descision
The idea of this article is really great and I can't wait to see the updates
Author's Response:
Thanks! I´m glad you like it! :D




Date: July 12 2022 3:11 AM Title: The descision
Nice story, though I'm with Clover. They need to get out and explore Anna's ass.
One thing, just to be clear, the anal beads are not inside of Anna right now? For the weekend? After all, they can see her in the room with them. Sounds like she doesn't have them inside for now.
You might be interested: https://aryion.com/g4/view/801974
I did those years ago; but your story reminded me of them so I posted a few of them.
You do have a lot of grammatical errors. They do not take away from the story however.
Well done, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I know I have some grammatical errors, I try to avoid them but English is not my native language, I hope is not a big inconvenience
Date: July 11 2022 8:19 PM Title: The descision
Love this story it’s pretty good
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it!