Date: July 06 2022 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 3: G37 Trial - Week 4
Wow this is great.
Your descriptive language is great, concept is great. Not sure where the story is headed but I hope you take your time getting there. At the risk of sounding like a back-seat writer: its always disappointing when stories with such interesting character dynamics (rival gangs, tenuous power balance with the prison authority, etc.) devolve into a rampage story as soon as the giantess becomes big enough that they cant easily be stopped.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
And nah, no worries. I don't want that happening anytime soon either. Part of the reason I enjoy the setting so much is because it IS still a prison. I won't go into spoilers but they'd need to be pretty big (or have multiple big people) to really rampage!
Date: July 04 2022 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 3: G37 Trial - Week 4
Fantastic!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I checked some of your other reviews and we seem to have similar tastes in stories.
It means a lot that you're enjoying my story along with the works of littlemac, pseudoclever, etc!