between the mechanics of shrunken women in the steakhouse scene as well as the waiver/spa last chapter, and the sneezing this chapter, I can't help but feel a certain someone has a big storm coming, though I could be wrong. Aside from that, I think this has become one of my favourite stories of yours, can't wait to see where it goes next!

Didn't expect this one to be as heartbreaking as it is and I didn't expect Evan to go as extreme as he did in the end. Like even if Eve said those things he didn't even try to press her about it before threatening her with murder so he's in the wrong. You succesfully made me feel as empty as Eve in that scene. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Evan's response is supposed to be over the top and going too far. He's a tiny guy in a world that's not friendly to them, despite his bravado he's not nearly as secure as he'd like everyone to think, and when confronted with something like this he's lashing out.

Wow, this just keeps getting better. It is an exciting development of events. I assumed that Amber would be that, the discordant note between those two. Oh, and Amber meets a guy who's a tinie hunter. wow that doesn't sound good