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Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2010 11:53 AM Title: Spending Christmas Morning With Bianca (17)

great story

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 8:25 PM Title: Spending Christmas Morning With Bianca (17)

Well! Surprise, surprise; they noticed his absence, at last.

For a while, I thought it was going to be like that Richard Long episode of the original TWILIGHT ZONE, where no one remembers who he is. Or, even that he existed!

Author's Response: Thats actually a very good idea.  i might use that in another story i have planned in the Very far in the future, but for this story I think I'll keep them aware of his existence.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 5:32 PM Title: Spending Christmas Morning With Bianca (17)

Another nice chapter. Keep them coming, these are great.

Author's Response: Thanks, I should have another one up in a couple of days.  the rest of his family will be more involved but they'll still be unaware.

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