[Report This]Date: April 20 2010 11:05 AM Title: Bianca Puts Her Slave To Work (16)
EXCELLENT! Well worth the wait.
As for Jake's missed opportunity? Even if he had thought fast enough to attempt reverse-psychology, I'm pretty sure Bianca would have been smart enough to see through it...and say as much out loud.
Author's Response: yeah, it would have to be worded very cleverly to trick Bianca into believing his lies
[Report This]Date: April 19 2010 11:14 PM Title: Bianca Puts Her Slave To Work (16)
I was hoping you would come back to this story as I am really enjoying where it is going. I am hoping that he finds himself in his sister's furry black ugg boots again as I enjoy the voyeur angle alot. Thank you for this and I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: I think you'll like the next chapter even more, even though it doesnt have his sisters ugg boots...yet
[Report This]Date: April 19 2010 10:49 PM Title: Bianca Puts Her Slave To Work (16)
nice to see this continued. Great job. The different perspectives and thoughts of each person were a nice added touch.
Author's Response: Thanks, I thought i would switch it up a bit and give the Giant Girl her perspective on things and how what she thought of things was quite different from what jake was thinking