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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2022 6:00 PM Title: Supply Chain Diversity

My goodness, even the dialogue was amazing in this chapter! 

Alanna’s story telling abilities were spectacular. It’s like she was telling Bill a horror movie and she was enjoying his reaction. 

I love it when a woman describes what she would do with a tiny guy. It just makes me excited because if you like what she says, it makes you excited for it to happen! 

That scene with Michelle was good. Her body language changing from her shy self has left Bill shaking. I love it! 

Also, the ending was superb with the him shrinking and Alanna finding him. Now those stories will come true! 

I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope the next chapter is as well received. I expect it to be a spicy one.

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