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Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: MicroHuggles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2023 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Hey, just noticed the updated text on your story, great work. I was the one that starred both of your stories, you're an excellent writer.
Massive fan of many of your works, especially this one and The Elf is Innocent!.

Would love to see more from you covering more niche topics, might be fun to have a chat in the future.

-MicroHuggles

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks a million! Yeah I have some niche interests lol. Anyways I'm glad you liked this one and One Year Lease, it was very flattering to see them featured! I'm usually down to chat about stories or whatever, you can DM me if you want on discord, greenanon#1333

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2022 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Want to write story in this world setting  and I wanted to make sure I didn't forget any  shrinky buffs:

1. Durability.

2. Fast regeneration. Same goes for stamina(sexual to).

3. You can go without air for hours.

4. Smell of a person you like makes you horny for her (pheromone stuff)

5.Their strength and physical characteristics is slightly higher than they should be if you use cube law, but not by much.

6. Size shift happens once in a while.



Author's Response:

The only one I can think of that you missed is that bugs and animals tend to avoid them, which if you're small is a plus lol.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2022 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Need to ask world building question:


How much of world's population has shrunk here?

I'm sorry if it was mentioned and i skipped it.



Author's Response: 2%, I think it is mentioned in the first chapter right after Jake shrinks.

Reviewer: pengasman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2022 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

This one really ticked all my boxes and made me smile :)) I really appreciate this story! 



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it, I like my stories to have a feel good vibe at the end of them.

Reviewer: imaybegae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2022 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

This story is so enchanting, it makes me wonder if it has showered within the past week or two. 



Author's Response: I'd say it was good clean fun, but it was only two out of three of those.

Reviewer: Kessler Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2022 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

With the five days a month upgrade would that mean they could dodge unusual size shifts? Just going, oh, that's a bit much I'll do this another time when I'm not going to be flea size.

Great story glad to see it find a happy ending.



Author's Response: Yeah I think the next version of the meter will probably let them dodge the crazy size shifts if they wanted, at the same time I guess they're still on the table for those crazy enough to want them lol. Glad you liked the ending.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2022 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

How tall is Kacey?

From all that was mentioned I only remember Jake being 6' and Ash being 2" taller than Andy. It's often mentioned she is petite but I don't remember if there was exact height mentioned.



Author's Response: I don't remember if I ever gave her an exact height but I always imagined her somewhere around 5' 3" or thereabouts, she's supposed to be fairly petite like you said.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2022 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I know something about world and character building because that what I usually pay attention to but it's hard to write individual interactions. How did you learn to write such good interactions? A lot of reading or something else?



Author's Response:

I read a lot and I write a lot, I don't really have any special tips other than trying to picture your scene and imagine the characters as people you know, having a conversation or doing whatever. I'd recommend just practicing it, reading it, and asking if the scene in your head made it to the page, then work from there. There are probably better writing guides online than me lol, I'd encourage you to simply give it a shot and see if it's something you want to pursue.

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