Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2010 5:56 PM Title: He Actually Escapes??? But For How Long? (12)

I don't what happened after "character descriptions." But, suddenly, you had one big run-on paragraph!

That, however, is the only flaw I found with this chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah i explained in the beginning in the chapter description that i ran ou tof time and had to leave before i could edit it.  thats why i hoped everyone would understand and not give it a low rating until i finished the next time i could log on  ( i dont have a lot of online time)