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Reviewer: Inthecoil21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2026 3:20 AM Title: Ryan's day at the beach

This was such a fun chapter to read and fun to see Mary be more assertive. I am hopeful we can get a Part two of this side story since Gwen and Mary has a lot of fun together.

And also to see Ryan be haunted by Milk is honestly hilarious so I hope for a Part two but if not then I am glad we got this tale

Ps. If you are reading this I hope you are having a good day

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2021 1:01 AM Title: Ryan's day at the beach

That was amazing.  Mary being a lewd, air-headed, but well-meaning sexy mom hit all the right buttons for me.  Ryan being trapped in her tight swimsuit was great.  Tiny people being trapped in tight clothing and in sexy places is something I just love.

I know this is a "what if" story but I wouldn't mind if Gwen made the crossover to the canon story.  That way we get giant dommy mommy girl on girl action, Mary gets a partner, and Ryan gets two moms to coddle and tease him.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2021 1:19 PM Title: Ryan's day at the beach

This was a great read, plenty of good size interaction, and sexy content.

And a happy (well happy in that Ryan lived, albeit now haunted by Milk XD) ending, which is better than some people get in this series. 

Loved it :D 

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