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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2023 8:40 PM Title: The Reunion

Great erotic chapter. Great setup and pacing and good dialogue made this a believable plot. Well done. That said, there are some grammar and mis-spellings that require cleaning up. And there were a couple tidbits near the very end (farting, squirting, water sports) that I felt were unnecessary and perhaps an effort by the author to please everyone - they didn't really belong in this story.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2021 6:04 PM Title: The Reunion

really really liked this one

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2021 12:25 PM Title: The Reunion

Lol loved the Safe Tiny Vore Play Accidentally Turns Deadly idea.

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