[Report This]Date: March 02 2021 1:36 AM Title: Wicke
t's finally back! I will give you a perfect rating for that alone. (Even if not all of the chapter's contents were my thing.) You have a typo in the chapter's tags though unless the last one actually means to say "Breat Milk", but if so i want to know what that means.
I wonder what happened to Faba - as he used to tinker with a machine that could both shrink and grow male and females alike...
I bet he had a ... tragic accident.
"She always wondered what happened to her Psychic specialist co-worker, disappearing after meeting with the President alone, but Lusamine never elaborated more than a Misdreavus smile." - Knew it!
"He hadn’t gotten that warning, just trapped in her or another girl’s shoes, sat and farted on, or shoved up one of their filthy backdoors." That seems like plenty of warnings for Charlie, but it seems like it wasn't properly communicated as such. Also you had a typo in this sentence that I marked.
"She never had any children of her own, the closest before being Gladion and Lillie." Come to think of it. What happened to Gladion? Is he the most precious son of Lusamine? Or a possession of Lillie? Or maybe he fell into the hands of Plumeria?
So use the app to apply abilities/attacks onto everyone including the owning girls already became commonplace? Looks like our Unovan Scientist made her findings way more public than it seemed to.
Imagine having No Guard applied to you... >.>
Author's Response:
Ahaha... haha... Wh-What typo... *sweat intensifies*
Yes, it was nice to come back to this setting, there's just so much potential!
I'm sure Faba is safe(ish) wherever he ended up and Charlie wasn't the smartest. But such are the fates of men in this new Pokémon world order, win or lose you're better off just hiding... unless you're Tate.
Though in all seriousness, most named male Trainers are 'missing' from the public eye. Maybe in another chapter later on some of their fates will be revealed, but until then you're free to imagine whatever kind of situation you'd like them to be in lol
The knowledge of applying and using moves and abilities in and of itself was discovered fairly quickly, what the scientist was researching was if there were any differences if shrunken Trainers used them since not everyone is willing to use Self-Destruct and the likes on their new toys/meals. Girls just have to use caution experimenting on themselves, wouldn't want to burn, freeze, poison or any of the many other horrible things one could do to themselves, so much just stick to basics :)
No Gaurd, how about Wonder Guard! Become invincible... to most things.
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the story, thanks for the review! (and pointing out those typos)