[Report This]Date: May 04 2026 6:39 PM Title: Tess
I've liked a lot of the shorts, but if more stories were like Tiny Pets I would be a very happy man
[Report This]Date: April 24 2026 6:10 PM Title: Tess
I read your story and I really loved it. It honestly stayed with me and made a strong impression on my heart. The world building is amazing, and while reading it, a few questions came to my mind related to the characters that I’d really love to ask you. Would it be possible for us to continue on Discord? I normally don’t share my personal Discord with anyone, but I genuinely liked your story and wanted to ask those questions, so I’m making an exception. My Discord is artatia_draws I’ll be waiting for you there.
[Report This]Date: February 07 2026 11:02 PM Title: Tess
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
Date: March 04 2025 10:22 AM Title: Tess
Would love to see Jason screw up and have his exasperated mother take him for a ‘conclusion’ with Abby. Perhaps this could take place some months after his 2nd time with her, after he’s had time to recover and forget a bit about the potential danger (or perhaps he takes it for granted she won’t do him harm based on surviving the previous occasions and believing she’s just trying to scare him)?
[Report This]Date: March 08 2023 2:34 AM Title: Tess
This is a great, very erotic chapter. I love the descriptions of the shrinkie's reactions in this one and his realization of what is happening to him.
Date: August 20 2022 2:55 PM Title: Tess
Great story and I love how Ally is turning into the psycho girlfriend that will let nothing get between her and her little man. I suppose breaking up with her isn't a option if he wants to live. I suppose sooner or later, she'll want him to move into her house so her can be with her 24x7 and no one will get between them. Can't wait to see a part 2.
Date: July 16 2022 4:58 AM Title: Tess
Another fantastic chapter.
As for what you had in mind, perhaps sand would be a good place to introduce some unaware or semi aware crushing. Since it's sand they may be compacted and crushed partially without killing them outright immediately so it's a good way to get in some great crushing descriptions while tiny person can escape with merely a few broken bones and cuts for more stories later. Perhaps he gets stepped on by a few members of her family, perhaps even his girlfriend herself, before being found. A wet foot is also easy to stick to and would represent a real challenge for the tiny to escape before they're shoved into some footwear or get crushed against an actually hard ground surface
Date: April 25 2021 1:25 AM Title: Tess
Chapter 11 with Tess and Tim was really good. I only wished that Tim could have been the one survivor so Tess would have him around for more of her twisted fun and games. There is so much more she could have done to him.
Date: November 22 2020 8:58 AM Title: Tess
It is a good work of writing, you should keep uploading. I find it interesting and I think many others do too.
[Report This]Date: October 30 2020 7:41 PM Title: Tess
Excellent wordsmithing. A vivid work of imagination!
[Report This]Date: August 16 2020 11:45 PM Title: Tess
I loved this chapter! Unique and in theory I'm hoping Mike survives as the toy was placed back in the drawer and perhaps began to drain...? Only an idea. Keep it up! I love everything you do!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2020 2:31 PM Title: Tess
Thank you for sharing this! A little criticsm I have is that here, you began a lot of sentences or short paragraphs with the same wird, like mike, mike, mike, mike. Thats just a tip for other work not to do, you actually didnt do it that much in previous works, and all those were awesome written.
Date: August 05 2020 8:51 PM Title: Tess
Thank you for writing this. It was a very nice job and I really enjoyed this chapter. Love to see more of Tess I had an idea for a chapter with her that follows the premise you set up here. I'd be happy to write the story and post it if you don't mind me borrowing you Shrinkism universe and the Tess character. If you prefer I don't mind submitting an outline for you to write. Just let me know however you'd like to see it.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2020 12:26 AM Title: Tess
Wow, just wow. I enjoy reading all of your work but this one was just something special. Loved how you were able to incorporate the objects that we saw in Shrinkism and show how cruel this world can be for people who shrink. I think another interesting idea would be to see the outcomes of the tinies that Allison bought in chapter 4 of Shrinkism. Keep up the great work!