Date: May 19 2021 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
I really love this story and hopefully it will continue because I want to see what Macy does to Blair.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2021 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Hey will we see Blair's mom. I want to see what her reaction will be when she finds out about their relationship or if she will you the shrink ray! :)
[Report This]Date: June 11 2020 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Great stuff. Blair's arc is very refreshing as she becomes more sympathetic over time, as opposed to the usual opposite.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2020 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Very good story.
Date: May 20 2020 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Loving this story. It's clear that Blair does actually care about Daisy, despite everything.
I hope it remains just the two of them though. Three's a crowd after all.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2020 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
One of the better stories currently in development and despite (or maybe due to?) a simple seting, an endearing one.
Setting aside the homemade shrink ray gun built by a self-taught orphan girl in spare time within a few days (I know the story is not about "how", but rather the event's implications. This kind of deus ex machina is, however, as cliche as they come...) nonsense, the story is actually pretty amazing. The writing is rich yet concise, the characters have true chemistry and the emotions, the tension! You got me hooked.
9/10, as overused plot designs have to carry some negative weight.
Best regards,
C
[Report This]Date: April 10 2020 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
This is a pretty unique story so far. I don't often see a dynamic like this where both parties involved have some level of interest in each other, even if it's subconscious to start with. I think the way you're showing it off its pretty accurate given how both Blair and Pixie are acting.
I hope you'll do more sweat play. It's pretty rare to see people try to write it, but for me, that was the best part when it came to later chapters.
I also think that how you started this story off was pretty well thought out. Building up both girls before any shrinking was introduced was a good idea, and it highlights their emotions afterward.
Hopefully, you'll update it again soon. Not a lot of stories on here have been keeping my interest like yours lately.
Date: March 02 2020 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
I hope you continue, really good so far :)
[Report This]Date: February 16 2020 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Cant wait for more.
Date: February 15 2020 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
What a great start! I can't wait for more