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Reviewer: Bobgal Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2020 2:07 AM Title: Summer trip

Great story so far! I enjoy your writing especially the details of the smells!Hope to see more of your writing! 

Reviewer: Medrinisoc Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2020 7:43 PM Title: Summer trip

I think this is a great story. Love all the detail about smells as well as the sheer helplessness. It's rare to see unaware stories that focus on smell, and so I'm really loving this gem. Would be nice to get some unaware perspective of her thoughts, as well as maybe a few pics. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, and I'll see what I can do I dont really plan it out it just kind of writes itself but I will try my best to incorporate.

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