Date: December 15 2019 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
Excellent chapter and story.
I've read all of your stories so far, and it's always a thrill to see an update.
Your writing is fantastic and creates a vivid image of the situations you are describing.
The only critique I have so far is your short "summary" that appears on the front page. Because I feel this story could get much more deserved attention. The story has such much to offer, and while your credit to Amanda at large seems nice, I think you could attract many more reader if you wrote an actual short summary, especially with your beautiful words.
Ah, enough of the rant. Hope to see many more stories of you in the future, especially hoping for Tower Syndrom season 2, sry just love girls with godlike power, no matter the size ;). And, if you allow me to ask, are there going to be many more chapters of the phoenix Initiative? I haven't read that one yet beacuse I like to wait until you've finished a story to binge read them in one go.
Anyway, keep awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your kind words! And I take your suggestion on the short summary. Maybe it's time to update it.
Not sure if Towers 2 will ever be made. I had an outline for a potential continuation, but I never started it. It's a possibility, but not a certainty. Regarding Phoenix, there are three chapters left. I'm posting a chapter a month, so you should see the story finished by February. It's my longest story yet (even at chapter 13, it's already longer in words than anything else I've written). So, make sure that you have enough time once you start reading ;)
If you are interested in seeing other works from me (including a recent audiobook I've started), please check papayoya.deviantart.com.