[Report This]Date: October 17 2025 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
So, this story is good; the problem is that it’s quite predictable—one character becomes evil and cruel very quickly, I’d say. But the ending catches everyone off guard. The final twist is spectacular, in my view skillfully built up little by little throughout the story, and it genuinely took me by surprise—I was really happy about that. I was going to give the story an 8/10, but the unpredictability of the ending bumps it up to a 10/10.
Congratulations—the ending is excellent and among the best in your work, because it truly surprises.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! And yes, it's definitely more predictable as it is more classic and ends up falling in cliches, I guess. I'm happy that you liked the final twist. I've thought about continuing in this universe since this twist offers this possibility, but never got to write a really good outline for how a continuation would be. But i don't discard coming back to it!
[Report This]Date: October 17 2025 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
So, this story is good; the problem is that it’s quite predictable—one character becomes evil and cruel very quickly, I’d say. But the ending catches everyone off guard. The final twist is spectacular, in my view skillfully built up little by little throughout the story, and it genuinely took me by surprise—I was really happy about that. I was going to give the story an 8/10, but the unpredictability of the ending bumps it up to a 10/10.
Congratulations—the ending is excellent and among the best in your work, because it truly surprises.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2019 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I’m only on Chapter 14 (it’s hard to make progress when the writing is as good as yours!) but I am loving this story. I need to catch up!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope that you will continue enjoying it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope that you will continue enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: August 09 2019 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like where this is going. Curious to know what's going to happen when Lucia gets hungry. It's definitely a more realistic scenario if a woman was to become giant.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you will continue enjoying it. BTW, the story will cover well what happens when Lucia's hunger catches up with her. It's a few chapters from now...
Date: July 27 2019 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is fantastic. Very realistic, and plausible. Excellent work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you will keep enjoying it as the story continues :)
Please, keep letting me know what you think!
[Report This]Date: July 26 2019 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking very forward to this story! I was a huge fan of "The Plan", I had many good faps to that one. This story seems like it won't disappoint, love the setup so far. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really hope it won't disappoint. Even if The Plan was quite rampagey, this one is more "classic giantess in the city", I believe. Please, keep letting me know what you think!