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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2009 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

"Foot's mother?" Lol!

Good one, Herb!

Reviewer: Canaan Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2009 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow.  Super nice descriptiveness.  It has me hoping that the protagonist will survive her full weight, just so I can see how you would describe it!

Reviewer: Ronnie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2009 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

The slower pace really paid off, you have a wonderful eye for detail.  Ever think about doing some voyeur stories?  I'll be reading your future work in either case, good job!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2009 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

*Reviewer, too moved for words, stands with right hand-over-heart, as recording of "Taps" begins to play over loud-speaker.* :-(

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