Date: July 05 2018 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
With all seriousness , this is material for a real-full fledged book.
Even without a giantess content this cheptar can easly enter the top 5 chapters list (if not number 1) so far. The way you describrd the battle is amazing, and you can really feel and see through Galin eyes.
Please continue with this amazing book
Author's Response:
I'm honored you think so, and thank you for the compliment.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2018 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
I said it before, I'll say it again, another great chapter! This story just keeps getting better and better. I love Gaelin being himself, opting to stand there and tutor his opponent in a match to the death! (all while Annallya is off in her cell training, having no idea what's going on).
Nefferel is another good character, too. Fighting for food as a prisoner from another city, she is not unkind, and it would certainly be nice to see her again at some point.
What will happen next? Don't know, but look forward very much to finding out!
Keep up the great work! This is such a wonderful story!
Author's Response:
Damn right. Gaelin's such a badass he has to teach his own killers how to kill him. I'll get right to work on the next chapter. Thanks for the compliments gtstory
Date: July 03 2018 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
Your descriptions are very well done. I'm curious as to how you seem to be so insightful about swordsmanship and other fighting styles. Are you in the service? Do you practice any IRL? I ask because I realize that most of the best author's stories/books/novels contain at least some part of themselves, their experience, it makes their writing more believable and authentic, more sincere.
Author's Response:
haha, no I'm not in the service, and I haven't had the time to seriously study martial arts, though after I'm done school I hope to. I guess I've just got a vivid imagination for action scenes, and I'm just good at describing it. Plus I suppose it also comes from reading authors who are much better at that than me. But I take it as a compliment that you thought it was well written enough for it to mean I was experienced in combat.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2018 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
Damn!
Today, Gaelin defied gods!
Author's Response:
Roll credits
*ding*
[Report This]Date: July 02 2018 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Really Nice well written chapter! It reminds me alot of the "Amazon Lily" arc in One Piece, dunno why, it's nowhere near as silly but it just popped into my head while reading this. Also I like the path you chose: two estranged friends (lovers?) separated by a cruel fate, each dealing with their own hardships and vowing to stay alive to meet once again. Sort of a cliche' at this point but hey, it works and gets the emotions boiling, especially when it's well written! I'm REALLY looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Did it? I was afraid everyone would think I ripped it from Thor Ragnarok, even though I came up with this idea before I saw the movie. But I can definitely see Amazon Lily, I'm a little behind on my One Piece, but I've seen that arc. Yeah, I suppose it is a tad cliche to have them sepparated and imprisoned, but hopefully I'll be able to shake things up soon enough. Thank you for the comment
Date: July 02 2018 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
What a pugnacious race the Titans are. Makes me wonder if Gaelin would have killed Nefferel if she was older, you know, to honor that Warrior's Pride code. I think it was cool how Gaelin taught her some proper swordplay while they fought and thanks to his display, the other inmates know not to mess with him. Perhaps they might even admire his skills as a warrior?
I swear, your story could even become a movie. Er... Maybe a book. They always know how to screw up the book version when they convert it into a movie.
I eagerly await more!
Author's Response:
it's possible, but he didn't just spare her for her age. Maybe that'll be explained, maybe it won't. Yeah I found myself enjoying writing out that part as well, giving lessons to an opponent who legit wants to kill you as you fight them. Personally I don't know if I'd want this to become a book or not. I'd certainly be overwhelmed if it did. Thank you for the compliment, though
Date: July 02 2018 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
I truly do look forward to this stories updates. I want to see what will happen to this status quo between the titans and humans if this keeps up. Good luck and keep it up man!
Author's Response:
I'm interested as well. Will anything with the titans change? Do they even want to change? Can't wait to find out myself. Thank you for keeping an eye out for updates